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Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2007 06:41 am Title: Chapter 1

Your smut was not bad, not bad at all.;)  Very nice angry Jim to..

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2007 04:37 am Title: Chapter 1

Not your strongpoint ? Girl, that was hottt .

Reviewer: juteux Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2007 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 1

"Good girl," he murmured against her, and the sensation made her shudder.

 Good golly, this fic was hot, but that line was really hot in particular! I do so love Jim in charge!

Reviewer: the_musical Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2007 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

shit. and by not your strong point you mean that was amazing incredibly hot right? 'cause wow. seriously. 

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29, 2007 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

Guh, guh, guh, buh, buh.....guh!!!

 *takes a minute to regain composure*

You better redact your chapter end note about smut not being your strong point, because that.....that left me breathless! Holy Hell! I think I need a cigarette and I don't even smoke!! Damn!! LOL!!! Wouldn't it be fun if some of these fics were available in virtual reality form and you could assume the role of whomever you wanted in that fic? Of course, I'd be Pam and this one would be on loop, haha! Sorry for that random thought. XD

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