10 [Report This]Date: July 25, 2009 06:59 pm Title: The Confession
Please finish this one! ;)
Date: August 10, 2008 02:08 pm Title: The Confession
This was awesome! And your characters are so realistic, I could actually see them do and say what you made them do and say, while reading. Excellent! I'm really in love with this story (and with Jim, god, could he be any sweeter?!), so I hope you'll continue soon!
9 [Report This]Date: September 18, 2007 04:46 pm Title: The Confession
Ha! Great idea! I can't wait to read more since Ryan's talking head was hilarious and spot on.
Date: April 01, 2007 08:35 pm Title: The Confession
What a fantastic concept. I like Ryan's POV here. My favorite part is "Man, I always have to tell her how great she looks. Always. I mean, I don’t mind. I guess. I just don’t get why she needs me to tell her all the time"! I'm going to go see what happens next!
Date: April 01, 2007 05:46 am Title: The Confession
ohmigosh so good, I would make a small suggestion, go back and edit your first chapter so that there are some breaks in it, right now it's one long paragraph (which i know a lot of people including myself have trouble reading) other than that, A-maazing /Kelly
Author's Response: Cool, thanks! I know I should probably use a beta...
Date: March 31, 2007 11:07 pm Title: The Confession
"What Not to Wear" is my OTHER favorite show, so you had me at hello. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: March 31, 2007 10:56 pm Title: The Confession
Well, I'm in for the ride. All you had to do was say "Ryan's POV" and I'm there :) Fun start!
Author's Response: Thanks toYOU (well, Hey Jealousy) I am now really into Ryan!