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Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 08, 2009 05:04 pm Title: Interlude -- Angela's Appointment

oh my god, this was great. i love how angela has these talks with god, finally someone she'll listen to! great job with this, and i'm going to keep reading.

(p.s., i can't wait for the wedding episode, sadly i live in seattle and the episode aires the last here, so hopefully i won't see any spoilers until then!)

Reviewer: Shassafrass Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2007 07:42 pm Title: Interlude -- Angela's Appointment

Hilarious. Like a comedy version of "Breaking the Waves..." Bravo

Reviewer: Rowena666 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 01:51 pm Title: Interlude -- Angela's Appointment

[Angela…the green thing…that is just you, you know. I don’t have a problem with it. I kind of created green.]

Hehe! Loved that, and Dwight referring to Angela as his Arwen, and G-d making a TWSS joke, and basically the whole chapter. Really interesting, funny premise.



Author's Response: Thanks so much. Sometimes what I love about Angela is how she just makes up these rules about morality from nowhere....like Green being whorish.

Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2007 10:55 am Title: Interlude -- Angela's Appointment

Hahahaha I'm not done reading yet, but I had to stop to comment on the fact that God's TWSS made me laugh a highly unholy little laugh while sitting at my desk. You should have a not safe for work warning on this. :) 

Author's Response: Thanks Azlin. I appreciate your comments and you reccing this over on TWOP. Don't worry, though, if you get in trouble at work. God has your back....or maybe that's Kevin that does.....

Reviewer: Cate the Great Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08, 2007 12:21 am Title: Interlude -- Angela's Appointment

Oh, this is cute. I love how she talks like Dwight.

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05, 2007 09:56 am Title: Interlude -- Angela's Appointment

He asked the opinion of 5 separate sales associates and one guy sitting outside the waiting room holding his wife’s purse. He smelled them and touched them and finally settled on the one he gave you. As he explained to the clerk ringing up his purchase, “…she will look like a lovely and ethereal forest elf in this. She will be my Arwen” ]

Omigod!  So perfectly Dwangela -- funny and touching at the same time.  And God?  Doing a TWSS?  I'm... in love you, and I'm not planning to move to Stamford just because I told you. 

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05, 2007 06:10 am Title: Interlude -- Angela's Appointment

This is hilarious. I love it. God is great and has such good taste in watching The Office.

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 06:56 pm Title: Interlude -- Angela's Appointment

Wow. That was just wow.  Great idea and so well written :) The "I kind of created green" line = a huge laugh; anything about Angela and green is amazing.

Reviewer: McGigi Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 02:38 pm Title: Interlude -- Angela's Appointment

Ha! These scenarios are hilarious, right down to each perfect detail. Thank you for writing it, and I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Wendy Blue Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 01:27 pm Title: Interlude -- Angela's Appointment

This just gets better and better. I love it!  Great job!

Reviewer: kth201 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 11:42 am Title: Interlude -- Angela's Appointment

Ha ha. I love how God responds to Angela's insanity. I'm looking forward to his thoughts on Jim and Pam.

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 10:15 am Title: Interlude -- Angela's Appointment

this is just too great.  I love how God has such a great sense of humor (I can't believe he threw in a twss! Hilarious!)  Your Angela is so spot on and I can't wait to see what God has to say about this horrible hiatus/time apart he's made us sit through!



Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you think that I did okay with Angela. She's difficult to write and I hadn't intended on writing her until the last sentence of chapter 1 popped out of me. And with the TWSS....I was just rereading the piece for the 80th time and realized that when God said that Angela made things hard....harder than it had to be, that it was an actual and unintended TWSS. I couldn't let that go. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 10:11 am Title: Interlude -- Angela's Appointment

I think there's an error in this one.  Shouldn't you say "loved it" instead of "didn't like it", in "are you sure you were lying when you told him you didn’t like it?"?

I love this chapter, maybe even more than the prior one.  My favorite: "Maybe you could see if you could do something, um, nice for her if you know what I mean”
[I’m on it, Angela]".  That's so good!

Is there anyone we need to smite yet? 



Author's Response: Thanks for finding that error! I've fixed it now. And I really appreciate your feedback....so far, no smiting!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 04, 2007 10:08 am Title: Interlude -- Angela's Appointment

Sex with Dwight is the eitome of odd. It sends shivers down my spine.
This was just... wow, i love this chapter. It explains so much about Dwight and Angela to where its sweet not creepy!
I think you can be allergic to a color of food. I basically detest all red foods. apples and pepporoni i think are the only red things i eat. and red m&ms!
this is just, great.
(now god, again, work on JK shirtless :))

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