9 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2007 11:53 am Title: Summer Into Fall....Why God Needs a Vacation
I liked the beginning especially. Because God truly does direct us with little nudges, but doesn't treat us like puppets. Well written!
Date: April 09, 2007 01:54 pm Title: Summer Into Fall....Why God Needs a Vacation
I love that Phyllis refers to Bob as Bob Vance, Vance Refrigeration even in her prayers. Another great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks Rowena....I was a little worried that it didn't quite ring true, but I figure if something is a force of habit in your normal life, it would transfer to prayer.
Date: April 07, 2007 06:41 am Title: Summer Into Fall....Why God Needs a Vacation
Finally was able to read this again!
Oh comon god, free will is overrated. Specially with these two who just don't know what to do with themselves.
I loved those little lines... all so in character! Well obviously, since a bit was quotes, ut still :)
Date: April 05, 2007 06:46 pm Title: Summer Into Fall....Why God Needs a Vacation
i LOVE THIS! It is so unbelievably creative, and I adore the montage of memories form all the episodes.
I can't wait to read mreo!
Date: April 05, 2007 04:47 pm Title: Summer Into Fall....Why God Needs a Vacation
I actually started to cry a little, remembering Pam's sweetness to Michael in "Grief Counselling." I hope tonight's episode gives you something good to work with!
Date: April 05, 2007 04:12 pm Title: Summer Into Fall....Why God Needs a Vacation
This is awesome! I love this God characterization. His conversation with Angela was priceless, particularly his response to the green thing. It's nature, Angela!! And all the miscellaneous quotes and thoughts from the third chapter worked well, how you didn't even have to explicitly say who or when it was, it was just clear.
Date: April 05, 2007 03:46 pm Title: Summer Into Fall....Why God Needs a Vacation
Definitely my favorite story at the moment. Great chapter! I loved God's answer to Kelly's prayer;) And Pam has a special place prepared for her... aww.
Date: April 05, 2007 01:33 pm Title: Summer Into Fall....Why God Needs a Vacation
Seriously, I'm running out of adjectives for how good this is. Because it's just exactly what everyone must have been thinking and you wrote it so true to character. I hope you continue!
Date: April 05, 2007 01:28 pm Title: Summer Into Fall....Why God Needs a Vacation
contrary to popular opinion, I’m not really in the damming business -- this made me cackle out loud -- but God already knows this.
And all the voices in their prayers -- totally awesome! Not to mention, hysterical!
Date: April 05, 2007 01:28 pm Title: Summer Into Fall....Why God Needs a Vacation
Your God sounds a lot like the one I like to imagine. Smart, patient, with a wicked sense of humor. Keep it coming!