Date: May 18, 2007 04:28 pm Title: Shalls and Shall Nots
I like you, God. *laughs* No, I really do. You do such a great job on this fic, GodinthisChili's. Thanks!
Date: May 02, 2007 10:13 pm Title: Shalls and Shall Nots
Ooh, such an insightful chapter! Cool to see what lies underneath their motivations to do certain things, and what God would forgive unquestioningly versus what he thinks they should work on.
Author's Response: So glad you liked it. Thanks as always for your reviews.
Date: April 30, 2007 03:43 pm Title: Shalls and Shall Nots
Ok, Pam, Jim -- I have a message from God here for the both of you: Stop lying to yourselves and each other and get it together already! That is all.
Author's Response: Exactly! I'm with you, lisahoo!
Date: April 30, 2007 03:07 pm Title: Shalls and Shall Nots
I so love this. I love God as the objective voice through all this - telling us how it really is. This chapter and Christmas were my favorites thus far.
I’ve found, though, that the life (and love) that’s worth anything at all is full of the lessons that you gain by sinning and by being forgiven.
Me too. :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind words. I'm glad you are enjoying this.
Date: April 30, 2007 02:15 pm Title: Shalls and Shall Nots
big "looser" bassoon - I think you mean "loser", as in, someone who loses, not "looser", like less tight.
My favorite was the Jim/Karen argument; I loved this line: "Karen, on the other hand, could stand to clean up her language just a little." Haha!
I like that God has a little soft spot for Roy, and the little Jim/Karen adultery section.
In the Pam coveting section, this sentence "She has lazy Sunday afternoons on his couch and buckets of fast-food chicken" made me think "but does she have ketchup fights?"
This continues to be just such an interesting story.
Author's Response: Thanks for that. I don't know what a loose bassoon is and I'm sure I don't want to know. Glad you are liking the story. I have a soft spot for Roy, so I guess that explains why my God does too.