Date: February 23, 2008 10:53 am Title: Five xxxxx
Awww!! Sweet like candy.
Date: April 12, 2007 04:01 pm Title: Five xxxxx
Hurray! The whole paragraph about the "rough patches in their relationship" is really good. I like how she's caught daydreaming and "Jim's half-smothered, mocking smile". ("Daydreaming, Beasley, on our wedding day? Really?")
I didn't realize there'd be one more chapter. Hmm. (Hopes it's not a deathbed scene; goes to check.)
Author's Response: Nope. No deaths here. Just sweet Jammy goodness. Thanks for the review!
Date: April 12, 2007 11:09 am Title: Five xxxxx
he suddenly moved toward her again to kiss the corner of her mouth before gently sliding his tongue across her bottom lip
Whoa! Hot! Yum. That beautiful mouth of his....
Hey, who turned up the heat in here?
Author's Response: Hahaha that's hilarious because I know it's so tame compared to the rest of the fic world, but it's definitely the steamiest thing I've written yet and I swear I blushed while typing it.
8 [Report This]Date: April 12, 2007 10:12 am Title: Five xxxxx
Is it sad how addicted I have become to TWoP in such a short time? I am thinking that there is something with The office that is kinda like a drug... because anything related to it, I get addicted like THAT
First Kiss - so sweet and innocent
Second Kiss - I loved how Jim thought of the Dundies kiss. It is so totally believable, and its just, poor Jim. Just for that one night, he could believe she was his.
Third Kiss - broke my heart
Fourth Kiss - needs to happen
Fifth Kiss - perfect. And totally made up for breaking my heart
Author's Response:
Yes, The Office is so addicting! I just can't help myself. In fact, I realized the other day that I'm actually in that head over heels kind of love with this show and I've only ever done that for two other things in my life. And they both ended up being jerks, so there you go...
Anyways, glad you liked it!