1 [Report This]Date: November 24, 2018 06:47 am Title: Epilogue: Impressions
This is lovely! And Pam getting angry and throwing the mug was great!love the visual of her apartment. Really nice story on these two.
10 [Report This]Date: February 10, 2017 02:41 pm Title: Epilogue: Impressions
This is perfect. Everything about it. Perfect. In my top 5.
9 [Report This]Date: March 20, 2016 09:56 pm Title: Epilogue: Impressions
Yes! That's what Pam needed to do, early in season 3! Great job on the last chapter. It was easy to tell who was whom.
Date: April 17, 2007 03:48 pm Title: Epilogue: Impressions
Great story! I loved the talking heads at the end!
Date: April 17, 2007 02:12 pm Title: Epilogue: Impressions
Ha ha ha! Great job with the epilogue -- the character voices are so spot-on that you don't need labels to know who is talking. Fantastic story.
Date: April 17, 2007 12:09 pm Title: Epilogue: Impressions
Really, really, really, REALLY good. Two things made this great to me. The first was that you presented a Pam argument that I never really considered before. I now have a better understanding of what might be going thru her head. It's way easier to blame Pam for this (even though she should share in it) than Jim; but now I see it a little differently. And the second reason is that you showed what I think to be true. Pam's incredible fear of telling JIm " I love you." That will be a monumental moment in the show and you made it feel that way in your writing. Excellent! And the Office talking heads at the end are great!
Date: April 17, 2007 08:35 am Title: Epilogue: Impressions
This is great!
My one quibble is with Stanley's bit; I doubt he would say this much. I could see him saying the first and third sentences, or maybe even just an "I don't care" with a drawn-out I, in that Eeyore way of his. (I love Stanley scenes.)
If Michael's speech were on the real show, you would have The Great Intubater on TWoP or the NBC board the very next day. That's so funny and so Michael.
Everyone but Stanley I thought was spot-on and I recognized their "voices" right away. Dwight's TH with "- idiot - " slipped in there was so funny.
Ryan's really cracked me up to.
Thanks for this story. It was so much fun to read. And, you know, I don't care at this point on the real show if there's a fight or not, if there's a confession or not, if we see it or not, just get these two together!! Thank goodness we have fanfic and stories like this to relieve our stress!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I stared at the Stanley line for a while... am still messing with it, actually. His and Ryan's, so I'm glad Ryan's seemed ok.
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading... it's nice to have an outlet while they keep slapping us with reruns. God, what will i do this summer? ;)
Date: April 17, 2007 08:00 am Title: Epilogue: Impressions
Ha ha ha ha ha! Great epilogue. I loved this story. Thank you for writing it!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks for reading it. :D