10 [Report This]Date: November 03, 2007 10:52 pm Title: Weak
This story. Just, wow. This chapter could not have been any more perfect. I can see though, how it would be difficult for you - so many directions in which you could go, but I think you absolutely nailed it and it was just...perfect.
I just love how Jim knows how to get through to her - what to do, what NOT to say. I love how he wants to protect her and SHOW her, not just tell her. I honestly have no words for how much I love this story and I was ECSTATIC to see it updated. I can't wait for the next update.
10 [Report This]Date: November 03, 2007 10:43 pm Title: Confusion
Gah. I am a mess and I have no words. I really, really, really hope you know how amazing and gorgeous and brilliant all of this is and how incredible you are for writing it. I just.. gah. Lovely, lovely chapter, as always, and I can't wait to see where you take Pam next.
Date: November 03, 2007 10:39 pm Title: Confusion
OMIGOSH! I'm almost crying over here. That was such a Jim thing to do and I love it. The key and the directions? Just brilliant. I'm glad you decided to continue this.
10 [Report This]Date: November 03, 2007 10:38 pm Title: Confusion
i really do love this story... i hope you update soon.
10 [Report This]Date: November 03, 2007 10:35 pm Title: Confusion
I read this story for the first time when this site was down, and i just fell in love with it. You are an excellent writer. I cried, it broke my heart all the emotion.
I hope that chapter 8 is posted soon, but i can see what you mean about this being a hard story to write. I know that if I were writing stuff with this kinda of material I would need to step back too.
Date: November 03, 2007 10:22 pm Title: Confusion
Athena--
A warning that this review is about to get completely out of hand. I'm awed, stunned, bewildered, and bewitched by this story! I've been waiting for updates all summer, but the wait was more than worth it. This is so lovely, and I can't imagine how a chapter of this fascinating story could ever disappoint. Your handle of the characters' emotions is breathtaking; in the hands of a different author, this could be a campy, silly, melodramatic story, but you have crafted it into a stunningly honest tale that has held my attention since day one. I am so impressed, and I'm already excited for more, so start writing, missy! --CH
Author's Response: Wow! Okay, that was one of the nicest things anyone has ever said to me. Like. Ever. You probably should know that you were one of the people who pushed me to write this chapter. There were others, but you were one of them. So thank you :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 03, 2007 10:22 pm Title: Weak
Of all the stories I've ever read, this one is my favorite. Hope your next update comes quicker next time!
Date: November 03, 2007 10:18 pm Title: Confusion
OMG I. LOVED. THIS. CHAPTER. !!!!!!! Finally, some hope!! :D Beautiful. And the TWOP boards is totally where I found this story! And I'm so glad I did! <3
Author's Response: Oh, thank you! I'm so relieved it made you happy!
10 [Report This]Date: November 01, 2007 01:42 am Title: Hate
Please, I beg you, please please please update soon. I don't want to push but this story is so far beyond amazing and I need it. So badly. I check to see if its been updated every day now, sometimes twice a day its getting that bad!
Okay, I'll shutup but please please please update. Please. This story is so good.
Date: October 30, 2007 09:23 am Title: Weak
You promised no more waiting. Regular updates. All a person has is their word. I don't mean to sound crazy or stalkerish or anything, since this is my third time commenting on the same chapter. I just love this story that much. You're that tallented. And I'm dying over here wondering what happens next. Don't force yourself to write the next chapter quickly to make everyone happy, but at least force yourself to write it. I know it's hard, this is why I don't write fanfictions anymore. But if you're gonna give up, at least give up after this story is finished.
10 [Report This]Date: October 23, 2007 07:37 pm Title: Weak
This story is so very compelling. I have read the entire story from start to finish numerous times. It gets me every time. I hope that you will update this story. Your writing has evoked so many emotions and I am anxious to see how it plays out. Wonderful job!
10 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2007 07:03 pm Title: Weak
This story is incredible. I read it on cache while the site was down, and just read through it again. It's wonderfully written. Very dark and real. Can we expect and update soon? I hope so!
Date: October 18, 2007 09:39 am Title: Weak
I delurked just to plead with you to update this amazing story! It's so powerful and moving, wonderful writing thus far.
10 [Report This]Date: October 16, 2007 03:05 pm Title: Hate
Said it before and I'll say it again..love this story and can't wait for an update!:)
Date: October 12, 2007 05:27 pm Title: Weak
WHY OH WHY HAVE YOU NOT UPDATED???
sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooob.
me
Date: October 12, 2007 08:59 am Title: Hate
Please update as soon as you can! So well written!
Date: October 12, 2007 12:04 am Title: Hate
This is so good! Please update soon!!
Date: October 02, 2007 10:00 am Title: Hate
Hi, I know how hard it is to update stories like this. I wrote one myself for another tv show and it took me forever to get finished. Reviews always helped modivate me, so I thought I'd give you another. I love this story. It's incredible and heart-breaking. I won't ask you to update soon, just to please update.
10 [Report This]Date: September 24, 2007 07:35 am Title: Hate
Hello,
I know how annoying it is when people say this, but please update soon :)
Thank you
Date: September 11, 2007 11:15 am Title: Hate
This story is amazing as usual. I'm so glad you updated. Can't wait for the next one.
Date: September 10, 2007 04:02 pm Title: Weak
This is such a compelling story. Thanks for the update!
Date: September 04, 2007 05:38 pm Title: Hate
this is a great story, written so well! Please update very, very soon!
10 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2007 01:00 pm Title: Hate
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING! I seriously had been checking everyday just for this story. This update wasn't quite what I was hoping for (more Jim/Pam interaction), but it was still so good. I don't know how you do it, but I'm on the verge of tears with every chapter and I am not a person who cries easily. Jim's interaction with Pam's mom was so good, meaninful on multiple levels. I can't wait to read the next chapter and I really hope we don't have to wait as long. Keep up the amazing work!
Date: August 30, 2007 08:39 pm Title: Hate
Holy cow. Gotta know what happens next. hurry hurry hury
10 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2007 02:35 pm Title: Hate
so wonderful and emotional. I feel like I cry every chapter of this. Please update soon, I enjoy a little emoting now and then ;-)