Date: January 01, 2009 09:19 am Title: Michael
There is only one review for these two chapters, because, this is my 2,009th review. On the first day 2009. Totally dorky. But awesome. At least to me.
Oh, Michael. Jan. You never make sense. Never. But still. You can't look away.
Author's Response: Hahaha! So that's why I got reviews for old stories. Well, okay, I'll take it. :) Happy New Year, mi amigo!
Date: April 21, 2007 07:29 pm Title: Michael
Hee! Great great great.
Author's Response:
Aw! Thanks thanks thanks. ;)
Date: April 21, 2007 10:17 am Title: Michael
There can never be enough Michael/Jan fic! Poor Jan just trying to work up the courage to go inside...and Michael still so clueless. hahaha. Nice job.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: April 20, 2007 06:03 pm Title: Michael
What a great last line!! I like all of it, and the detail of what Michael may be thinking, but that line is a clincher!
Where, though, is Michael's "and I also..." line? He had to become aware of what was actually happening to say that, right?
It's fun to revisit an episode like this in fanfic after a repeat! Makes for something different.
Author's Response: To me Michael seemed befuddled enough in that line to not really be thinking about what he's saying. So he still said it, but at the same time he was a little distracted by thoughts of their hotel room in Sandals, Jamaica. ;)