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Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2008 10:30 am Title: clothespin

I love the pictures at the end, they always help me picture your fic perfectly!!!

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2007 02:04 pm Title: clothespin

Wow...I am amazed at Pam.  That is some incredible party-planning skills being put to work there.  I love that she showed him how much she remembers what he says.  Wonderful.

Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 06:56 pm Title: clothespin

Aw! So wonderful!

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 09:20 am Title: clothespin

Pam is a goddess.  I love her--not as much as Jim does, but I do.  :)


Author's Response:

Yes, Pam has more power than she realises.  I just hope she starts using it soon!!!!

Thanks for reviewing! 

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2007 05:34 am Title: clothespin

I love this idea! That Pam makes gestures to show Jim that he matters...hope the end will have a positive response from him. I'm sure it will, because how could he resist?

Author's Response:

Exactly - how could he resist?  He's making me just as nuts as Pam is sometimes! 

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2007 11:43 pm Title: clothespin

I shed a tear for this chapter. pam, please please please get it together and do something like this for jim? the poor boy's too dense to get the fact that you love him... 

Author's Response:

After last night's stunning display of speaking her mind, I think Pam might actually find some more of that courage - here's hoping, right??

Thanks for the review! 

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2007 08:04 pm Title: clothespin

OK, this is just what I needed tonight.  The 6-month anniversary & Karen's panties and made me die a little inside.  And they were ugly too.  So sweet, sweet Pam making a grand gesture to remember Jim's grammy was the perfect antidote.  

Pam = grammy's lemonade, double stuf oreos, polka-dotted sundress

Karen = Call of Duty, "take me on a trip", ugly lime green slutty undies

No contest. 



Author's Response:

Yeah, the color choices had to mean something.  I mean, who finds pistachio green underwear sexy??  But that plush red/fuschia robe?  I'll take door #2, bob!! 

And I hate to break it to miss thing, but the only trip she's going on is to the dumpster.  

Do I sound bitter? I feel like I sound bitter..... 

Reviewer: Night Swept Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2007 05:39 pm Title: clothespin

The grandmother storyline is really touching and well done.  Nice work!

Author's Response: Thank you!  I felt I walked that very fine line between touching and sappy - glad you liked it!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2007 05:22 pm Title: clothespin

You know I love it.  So sweet - but not too sugary.  Of course Pam would know (and remember) how important something like this would be to him. 

Take that Karen.   :)



Author's Response:

Take that Karen.   :)

Indeed.  In the form of a fast moving city bus.  

Thanks for all the help with this!!!

Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2007 05:05 pm Title: clothespin

Simply Beautiful!  I teared a bit.  No outlandish gestures.  No sweeping proclomations.  Just the two of them.  Loving, sharing and opening just a bit to each other.  Love it, Moxie!

Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm going to keep writing every possible combination of them getting together until GD picks one he likes and uses it!!!

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