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Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2008 01:31 pm Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

That was so wonderfully written.

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2007 02:13 pm Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

Wow...FNB is sure showing up in full force.  I loved Jim's line about the only hard part being himself.  Haha...that was a good one.  And I liked "Sing" showing up again.

Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 07:11 pm Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

Eeee! SO cute!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 08:49 am Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

Yeah, I think that would be more than enough to knock the wind out of our boy's sails!

Author's Response:

hee - not that he would mind in the least, hmm??  :-) 

Long live fluffy fic - and thanks for reviewing!! 

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 10:39 pm Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

Hee! I love that you always include pictures! A night in is just what the doctor ordered for them! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

thanks, aggiegurl22! I find visual aids really help when I'm writing it - I'm glad you like the pictures, too!!

Thanks for reviewing!!! 

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 08:17 pm Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

"The only thing hard about his relationship with Pam, he thought bemusedly, was him when he was touching her."  Whew, what a hot line!  I'm really enjoying this story. I loved the lunch on the roof, such a sweet thing to do to honor Jim's grandmother.



Author's Response:

Between you and me, that is my favourite line of that chapter - I was hoping someone would notice it!!  :D

thanks for reviewing, Kay! 

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 02:58 pm Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

here is what Pam needed: http://www.pixelbomb.com/blog/images/2006/08/thumbs/ipod_panties.jpg

oh what a world we live in :) 



Author's Response:

Oh Holy Hell!  :-)

Do they come in pink?  

Thanks for reviewing! 

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 02:36 pm Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

So that's what I was missing!   I already have the iPod but I need the outfit to go with it.   So, so silly of me.

Better go shopping. ;)



Author's Response: Ha - I can't believe you didn't have that outfit already!!  Silly girl!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 11:50 am Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

wow.. and here i thought you'd made up the whole swavarski  crystal bit.. love it!!

Author's Response:

Nope - but you really aren't surprised SOMEBODY thought of doing that, right?   I'd love a pair, just not at $48 a set....

Thanks for reviewing! 

Reviewer: invis Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 09:29 am Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

Hooray!  It's about freakin' time, Pam!  :)


Author's Response:

LOL - ain't that the truth!!!!   

So glad you liked it - you rock for all your reviews!! 

Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 07:23 am Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

Talk about surprise!  Seems Jim is learning he needs to hold on for dear life because he never knows what Pam is going tothrow at him.  Not that I believe he minds :)

Love this: " And what he saw dropped his heart right into his shoes."  Excellent job here.  It is an incredibly fun story and it is nice to see them just being them :)



Author's Response:

Well, now that she's made a move 4 times,you think he'd be feeling confident enough to surprise her....  and nope, I think he doesn't mind anything she does for him in the least!!

 

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 07:19 am Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

Great googly moogly. My heart was in my shoes from the first paragraph.  Those were some inspirational ear buds, girl!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review - I really hope you liked it.  I figured you'd have no trouble adding the rest of the evening with your imagination! :-)

 

Reviewer: Willow Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 06:40 am Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

This is so sweet!

May we have a chapter 4a with the smut? 

;) 



Author's Response: hahaha - In one of those moods again, are we?  :-D

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2007 06:32 am Title: an iPod mini with Swarovski crystal earphones

"Look at me, Jim," Pam said. He did and she continued. "I was sure a long, long time ago."

Awesome line.  This story is so sweet, Moxie.  I like Pam's outfit a lot more than Karen's icky undies. 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I've always thought Pam would be more comfortable into pretty/romantic types of lingerie than slutty stuff.  (*cough*limegreenundies*cough*)

Did you get that, Everybody?  ;-)  

Thanks for the review! 

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