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Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 07, 2008 01:49 pm Title: a flyer for an Italian cooking class

PERFECT ending!!!!!!!

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2007 02:21 pm Title: a flyer for an Italian cooking class

I like that they don't have a perfect relationship and that Karen & Roy are still painful subjects for them.  Very true to real life.  And Jim saying Pam won't be able to get rid of him...sigh...very nice.

Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2007 09:18 pm Title: a flyer for an Italian cooking class

This was such a great ending, to a really awesome story. I loved it all! :)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2007 10:10 pm Title: a flyer for an Italian cooking class

"I mean, if I'm never going to be able to get rid of you, I might as well make the best of it, right?"  I guess that's Pam's way of saying "I'm not a complainer."

I want this kind of happy ending for Jim and Pam for realsies.  I don't even have to see any of it, just know it's happening...

Nice story.  Yay, happy Jim and Pam. 

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 11:58 pm Title: a flyer for an Italian cooking class

Squee!  I love it.  Love, love, love.  I love it as much as Jim loves Pam in the tub.  Hooray for shacking up!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 08:11 pm Title: a flyer for an Italian cooking class

Great ending. It was very realistic that their relationship wouldn't be all sweetness and light all the time - that there is still underlying pain that rises to the surface occasionally. I liked Pam's idea of getting a place of their own as it would be difficult to share Jim's bed with its history.  

Reviewer: jecksia Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 07:31 pm Title: a flyer for an Italian cooking class

warm and fuzzy. :)

Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 07:16 pm Title: a flyer for an Italian cooking class

Aw, man. These two are adorable. Thanks for a big smile to finish off my day!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 04:58 pm Title: a flyer for an Italian cooking class

This story was very cute and sweet.  Thanks for writing!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you!  I'm so pleased you enjoyed it!  Thank you for taking the time to review!!! :-)

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 04:47 pm Title: a flyer for an Italian cooking class

Wonderful ending. Loved it.

Author's Response: Oh yay!  I'm so pleased you enjoyed it!  Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 02:57 pm Title: a flyer for an Italian cooking class

I have a confession.  I printed this out at work so I could read it over and over during two very long, boring OR cases.  It certainly passed the time.  ( the patients did awesome, by the way ) 

Thanks for the happy JAM stories.  Can't get enough of those.  I don't blame Pam one bit though; I'd do Halpert in the tiny little Yaris before I'd go near that bed with the Karen cooties.



Author's Response:

Goodness, EH!  Are we adding Jam fic to the nation's medical curriculum!! Think of how that might affect the bedside manner!  :-)

Yes, the concensus seems to be that Jim's bed will have to be burned.  There is no choice.

Thanks for taking the time to review - I really appreciate it!! 

Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 02:18 pm Title: a flyer for an Italian cooking class

I love natural progression of this argument.  You did an amazing job with it. This was a great story, Moxie.  Just the dose of Jam happiness we all need about now!  And who would want to sleep in the bed that was once occupied by Karen? 

Author's Response: Yes, let's burn the Karen cootie bed!!!!!

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 02:04 pm Title: a flyer for an Italian cooking class

Bravo! I loved this! so super sweet, but not in a bad way.  Exactly what the depressed office watcher needs :)


Author's Response:

Thanks, PPC!  I'm hoping that after this thursday we have less reason to be depressed. *fingers crossed*

Thanks for the review!! 

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 12:15 pm Title: a flyer for an Italian cooking class

yay for all the surprises! loved reading all of this mox! and i'm sure you needed the break from writing squirrel, anyways. hehe,,

Author's Response: Thanks, StarShine!  You're right, it's good to take a break so it keeps my enthusiasm for Squirrel fresh!  Thanks for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 11:02 am Title: a flyer for an Italian cooking class

I agree, it would be very sad for Pam to miss out on an entire cuisine due to one unfortunate plot contrivance.

And I wouldn't want to sleep in Jim's Karen-tainted bed, either.  But I'd get over it real quick.  Try me.

P.S. loved this series. Hope it cleared your brain so more Squirrel can issue forth.



Author's Response:

haha, LisaHoo....I know what you mean.  That's why Stanley Steamer cleans mattresses, too.  ;-D

and yes....next up is Squirrel.  Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 10:49 am Title: a flyer for an Italian cooking class

The chick who has all these things on her desk sounds pretty damn cool.  ;)

As is the one who put them all to such lovely use.   I admire your restraint and creativity. ;) Excellent job.  I adored every word.  Thanks for this Mox!



Author's Response:

"The chick" is actually just a touch loony, but that's why she makes such a rockin' muse. ;-)

Hope these helped you keep yourself off that ledge!!!  When in doubt, read this again.... 

Reviewer: Willow Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 10:39 am Title: a flyer for an Italian cooking class

Very sweet!


Author's Response: Aw - thank you so VERY much!!:-)

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 10:09 am Title: a flyer for an Italian cooking class

Tuscan cooking together? Make-up bubble bath? Moving in together? This is like hitting the fluff jackpot. (And I thought you'd outdone yourself when you had Pam wearing marabou feathers in the last chapter.) Like eating a delicious bon bon, only without the pesky calories. Delicious, Mox.

Author's Response: Thanks, Colette!  I was worried this chapter would be kind of boring until the bubble bath idea hit..... and I am very proud of myself for so some restraint in letting you figure out all the hot sexytime stuff......  ;-)

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2007 09:10 am Title: a flyer for an Italian cooking class

aww precious! great job with this last chapter! 

Author's Response: thanks so much, rulesofjinx!!  I'm so glad you enjoyed it!  I hope we enjoy the last two episodes of this season as much!

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