10 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2006 10:36 am Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter. Loved it.
10 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2006 10:34 am Title: Chapter 9
Sad does not describe this chapter well enough but on the other hand can't wait to read more.
10 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2006 10:30 am Title: Chapter 7
Wow I need to read more.
10 [Report This]Date: August 15, 2006 10:27 am Title: Chapter 6
That was a gut wrenching chapter. I can't wait to read more. off i go
10 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2006 12:29 pm Title: Chapter 15
This was brilliant. If only we'd be able to see this on the show!
10 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2006 11:26 am Title: Chapter 15
Wow, girl7. That was amazing. I hope there will be more chapters forthcoming??
10 [Report This]Date: August 07, 2006 10:21 am Title: Chapter 12
I only recently started reading any fanfic at all, and I've never commented before, but I felt compelled reading your stuff. First, I should say that I read WHT (the whole thing in one sitting, I couldn't stop!) and it is probably my favorite fic ever, it's very realistic, especially in the romantic fluffy bits that we haven't gotten to see much of in the actual show. And so far ATF is just wonderful as well. I don't mind that you are recycling bits, since they were my favorite bits of WHT. :)
I do have one little tiny bit of constructive criticism, and I feel bad even mentioning it since I want to emphasize how good I think your writing is. But, here goes--I think the integration of the WHT stuff would be a little more seamless in this chapter if you brought Andi in a little more, particularly in the conversation about how Roy is the only guy Pam's ever been with. You have Jim mentioning Katy, but not Andi, and it seems like it would be in their heads. Anyway, like I said it's not a big deal, and I think ATF is great, and I can't wait to read the rest of it! Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: August 06, 2006 01:03 am Title: Chapter 15
Just like Jim, all I can say after reading that is "wow." Great story, girl7!
10 [Report This]Date: August 05, 2006 11:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. That is some amazing weekend.
I don't know if you've already done, but I really think you should write an original story. Not that your stories aren't original - I mean something non-fanfic. LOL!
I really think you'd be great at it.
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2006 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 15
I loved, loved this chapter! So much so that I should have been in bed an hour ago, but, just wow.
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2006 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 15
Gah, sexy and romantic. They should teach a Jim Halpert course in school. Very nicely done :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2006 11:38 am Title: Chapter 15
OMG. best. chapter. ever.
this is my favorite story.
omg, the part when they called it the weekend of jam - squee.
and then the whole chasing cars part - i have it playing on repeat. favorite song ever.
you've done such an amazing job with this story. i am like in love with it, haha.
keep up the good work :]
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2006 09:34 am Title: Chapter 15
Ok, Girl7, you are killing me. I read WHT in one night and I cannot believe I am saying this, but this one was better!! Your storytelling is so compelling that at times I actually felt like I was in the room with Jim and Pam (which is a little creepy when you think of it!) I will absolutely read anything that you write. I am your JAM slave!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2006 08:30 am Title: Chapter 15
This is the most beautifully erotic chapter I have ever read. Simply amazing.
Date: August 04, 2006 08:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Yikes...glad to see I'm not the only one who went over to the dark side this week! (But maybe this chapter should have an 'MA' rating too - and I only mean that in the nicest way.)
BTW - I wrote a whole passage in my latest chapter (soon to be posted) that talks about Jim making Pam a morning-after omelet - and other omelet related activities...now after seeing your story I'm going to have to go back and change it. Rats. Loved your story all the same!
Author's Response: No, don't change it! Keep it in! I can't wait to read your latest -- and thanks for the feedback!
Date: August 04, 2006 08:09 am Title: Chapter 15
Lovely. Just good stuff. And, as Kevin would say, "That's hot!"
(Must remember to pick up some Cool Whip on the way home today....)
Date: August 04, 2006 07:48 am Title: Chapter 15
Hey, you're awesome.
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2006 03:14 am Title: Chapter 13
Wow. (lol)
Okay, so I want you to know that I actually just spent literally 3 hours reading this entire story. I was bored around 2ish and thought, I'll read a story real quick then go to bed. Now it's 5 am. Yeah, way past my bed time.
All the angst chapters had me leaning closer to the screen, almost wanting to cry for Jim/Pam/Andi.. and speaking of Andi, I was fully ready to just close out the story when I read there was another woman. And I wanted to hate her, but man I couldn't.
Now these last few chapters I've been grinning like an idiot. Though I didn't see as much steam as I was hoping for, it was still great. I can completely see how it's easy to written from the vantage point of a girl lusting after Jim, cause oh yeah I'd been thinking along the same lines as Pam. Though I really don't think I'd be able to set up any kind of rules, whatsoever, much less follow them.
And now, I'm gonna end this cause it's getting ridiculously long and I'm starting to ramble. I love this, just simply love this and I'm waiting for more. Heee.
9 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2006 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 13
First let me say that I LOVE this story. I had read WHT and really liked it (esp. the last 2 chapters), but I think this one is even better. The pace is excellent with more external action to keep things moving along. I have to admit that the retread of the end of WHT did take me out of the story a bit. I don't know if the switch from angst to fluff was too abrupt or I'm just having deja vu problems. DON'T STOP - just providing the requested thoughts on that topic.
Date: August 03, 2006 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm loving this story - the slumber party and their rules were great, as were all the angsty bits before the fluff finally showed up. :) Thanks so much for updating as often as you have been, it makes it much nicer for me when I come looking for my Jam fix!
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2006 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 13
"Oh my god, she thought. Why did I say I want to take this slow?" Yes, Pam, why did you say that?
Smut! Smut! Smut! Smut!
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2006 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 13
I just read all 13 chapters straight through. I'm absolutely enchanted.
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2006 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 13
In answer to your query, no, it doesn't bug me too much. WHT was a great fic, one of the best JimPam ones I've read, so it doesn't bother me to be reminded of it. I do however like that you're changing things around a bit with the end of this chapter.
Date: August 03, 2006 02:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Suddenly, I like you even more ! It's so sweet and so much better for my heart ;) Thank you
10 [Report This]Date: August 03, 2006 09:19 am Title: Chapter 13
Hahaha, so cute. I'm glad that at the end it steered away from the other story.
And I just have to comment that the thought of Jim liking Fight Club is very nice. I loved the book and the movie. Stupid... I think not.