Date: August 26, 2006 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 5: "Basketball"
Um, hot. That is all.
Date: August 26, 2006 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 4: Diversity Day
OK, I need to find that book! Nice one :)
Date: August 26, 2006 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 3: Hot Girl
"She's not you." Gasped out loud. Yay :)
Date: August 26, 2006 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 2: "The Alliance"
Awesome. Again, perfect characterizations. The image of Jim's hands shaking will stay with me, as will his reaction when she comes back into the office to find him with his face in his hands.
Date: August 26, 2006 09:51 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Pilot
"...she was suddenly painfully aware of the fact that this was not just Jim, her best friend and confidant; this was Jim, a man who often looked at her with a hunger in his eyes that she always pretended not to see."
Oh, man, every time an author mentions the hungry look in Jim's eyes, I just get squidgy inside. Yum. Your characterizations are perfect, girl7. So looking forward to the rest...
Date: August 25, 2006 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 20: The Carpet
You have a knack for capturing the infuriating, tantalizing nature of the Jim/Pam dynamic that keeps us all hooked on the show. Your fic feels like the show. Amazing work.
10 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2006 01:43 am Title: Chapter 20: The Carpet
"I would marry this woman right now – on the spot – and I swear, she’d never have to fake another orgasm as long as she lived….."
Hot damn!!! That line had me fanning myself! I am so caught up in your writing...it just amazes me! I absolutely love every chapter! Keep up the good work!
Date: August 24, 2006 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 20: The Carpet
This was so beautifully sad - so close yet so far away.
10 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2006 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 20: The Carpet
This one is my favorite so far! I didn't want it to end, and when it did I wanted to smack Pam.
Date: August 24, 2006 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 19: Dwight's Speech
Every chapter I read from you has me wanting to shake these two and yell "give in already!!!"
Date: August 24, 2006 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 20: The Carpet
I didn't realize I was holding my breath as I read this until the end when I let out a deep sigh... just wow...
Date: August 24, 2006 09:54 am Title: Chapter 20: The Carpet
Once again, Pam makes me angry. This was so good and tense... just, really wonderful as usual. The premise of the cosmo quiz was really interesting, and hilarious that Dwight was filling it out.
Date: August 24, 2006 09:19 am Title: Chapter 19: Dwight's Speech
I love Pam, but sometimes I just want to beat sense into her.
This definitely doesn't suck. I know I've said this before, but you're so in tune with the characters that it amazes me.
10 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2006 07:07 am Title: Chapter 20: The Carpet
This one was especially good (plausible or not - hell, it's all made up stories anyway!) The quiz was such a clever idea. Amazed that you can be so prolific and still produce such good stuff (as I sit here, struggling to find the time and inclination to finish one damn story that's been cooking for 2 weeks plus!)
Author's Response:
You are so sweet! And listen, it's not a good thing that I'm writing this much -- seriously. I'm procrastinating on a hundred other things that I need to do for "real" life. I'm telling myself that when I finish all the episodes, I will STOP writing the fan fic - but it's so damned much fun!
Thanks as always for the feedback - and I can't wait to read your story!
Date: August 24, 2006 06:43 am Title: Chapter 20: The Carpet
Wow oh wow that was an awesome chapter
10 [Report This]Date: August 23, 2006 09:03 am Title: Chapter 1: The Pilot
LOVE IT!! great work!! =)
Date: August 23, 2006 04:04 am Title: Chapter 17: Halloween
Trick or treat? Ugh, this ripped me (and poor Jim) to shreds. Stupid, stupid Pam.
9 [Report This]Date: August 22, 2006 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 18: The Client
I was very confused by what they were discussing at first, making me very confused with the show's timeline, but I am glad you tried to fool us a bit to give these two kids a happy ending. That is always worth it. Hee. :)
Date: August 22, 2006 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 16: Boys and Girls
Great stuff, as usual. Yet another Snow Patrol song for me to check out! I like what you did with the deleted scene.
"...she'll realize that there's more out there than the things she discovered in high school?"
Great line. Wish we could really see him say this stuff to Roy.
Date: August 22, 2006 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 18: The Client
You're the best for letting them have some lovin'! These poor kids have suffered enough. Awesome chapter!
Date: August 22, 2006 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 18: The Client
ESKAJGHASF! That took me by surprise. Big time. I actually jumped out of my seat. Oh, you. Your writing amazes me every time. That and your crazy awesome imagination.
Never has "cheating a little" been so good.
Date: August 22, 2006 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 17: Halloween
Goddamnit, stop making me cry! Okay, so I didn't mean that. If me crying all the time is the price to pay for being able to read things like this, I'll gladly pay it.
You are awesome.
10 [Report This]Date: August 22, 2006 09:40 am Title: Chapter 16: Boys and Girls
Goddamn, you are so good at tension it's ridiculous. I really loved the song being a common thread, and that's coming from someone who doesn't like Snow Patrol, so don't take that lightly. =]
Beautiful as usual.
Author's Response:
You know, I'm glad you said that, because I wonder sometimes if the lyrics translate to people who are either unfamiliar with the songs or hate them -- so I'm glad you said that. With that song, it's like such a tense crescendo that builds and builds, I swear.
Thanks as always for your feedback!
Date: August 22, 2006 09:28 am Title: Chapter 16: Boys and Girls
Very very intense.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: August 22, 2006 08:08 am Title: Chapter 16: Boys and Girls
I think that this series is one of the only things keeping me going this summer. You write unresolved sexual tension so damned perfectly I swear it may kill me. God help me I can't wait for more...
Author's Response: Aww....Jim and Pam make it so much fun to write the sexual tension! (Well, fun in the sense that it's entertaining for me to write it, not that it's always a pleasant outcome....)