1 [Report This]Date: August 18, 2020 03:51 pm Title: Broken up it's only love
This is not the first time I have read this, but I want to say, involving Pam in that prank is one of my favorite moments.
10 [Report This]Date: April 06, 2008 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 26
Wonderful! It was a nice mix of the actual show and AU that came off as really believable and still in character.
8 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2007 12:22 am Title: Chapter 26
This is such a great story, and i loved it. And great choice of art school. My best friend just graduated from there, and the campus is beautiful... well if you want to call Brooklyn beautiful. Great job.
Date: July 16, 2007 10:38 pm Title: Closer, Closer
"That is... the absolute... worst stand-up I have ever heard."
best line ever! hahahaha
Date: July 13, 2007 01:18 am Title: Chapter 25
Pam and Jim in New York! How fun. Can't wait to read more.
Date: July 11, 2007 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 25
Yay for Pam & Jim in NYC. Poor Michael, though. Dwight will need to take his belt & shoelaces away from him...
10 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2007 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 25
A few typos, don't be offended!
"And I'm can go to art school," she stated
"I could get sued to this."
Other than that, I love this story. =D Great work!
Author's Response: yeah.. all those ones spell check won't catch! haha! I was in a bit of a rush... **blush**
Date: July 11, 2007 10:58 am Title: Chapter 24
Excellent writing! Very easy read & I can tell you love the characters! Please continue the story!
Thanks
9 [Report This]Date: July 11, 2007 06:26 am Title: Chapter 24
Yes, so mean. I'm currently in a similar waiting-to-hear-about-a-job situation and I hate it so thanks for adding to my misery. I like your take on TJ and I really like David here. Please update soon.
Date: July 10, 2007 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 24
Very well written. I liked the cliffhanger. Is this the last chapter though?
Author's Response: no!!! of course not... after the comments I received after chapter 23, I decided to go ahead and write chapter 24... and then at the very end I decided to have a cliffhanger. :) More is on its way--I promise!!!
Date: July 10, 2007 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 24
aaah! I hate you! No, realy, i love you. the way this story is playing out keeps me coming back for more. can't wait to see what comes next!
Date: July 10, 2007 09:39 pm Title: Chapter 24
you truly are cruel... please update!
Date: July 10, 2007 08:53 pm Title: I've had enough of this parade
So mean! This story was just the bit of fluff but substance that I needed. I'm hoping you're going to continue in the fall?
Date: July 10, 2007 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 24
ooooooooo mean. I wanna know how you take this.
Date: July 10, 2007 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 24
You are mean! I like that this chapter was longer (was it longer?...it seemed to be anyway). I am torn about what I want the outcome to be. On the one hand, if Jim doesn't get the job, he and Pam can stay in Scranton with all the beloved Office cast. On the other hand, if he gets the job, you can write about the Adventures of Jim and Pam in New York. And you can drag that story on forever (ahem...but you know, no pressure). Although, there is nothing stopping you from writing an AU season 4 of the Office if Jim doesn't get the job...
Ok, now I'm just babbling. I love this storyline, and I would love to see you continue it (in whatever form that would take).
Date: July 10, 2007 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 24
Yes, you are mean. This has been such a happy story. I'm hoping that continues....hint..hint... ;)
This is an awesome story, by the way. Keep it up!
Date: July 10, 2007 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 24
OMG, if Jim was going for the job, there's no way Ryan would get it!?! Is there?
Date: July 10, 2007 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 24
Ahh! Keep writing this. I love it! You have amazing style and it's 100% true to the show. =]
Author's Response: wow. I JUST finished writing that chapter! I can't believe you've already read it... **blushing** thanks! I will probably have the next chapter up tomorrow or thursday. :)
Date: July 10, 2007 08:50 am Title: Closer, Closer
more please
Date: July 10, 2007 06:34 am Title: Closer, Closer
Should you bother writing more? Absolutely you should! I have really enjoyed this story, it's a great look at how the season could have gone. Your characterizations are great, Michael telling Ryan he was the only one who could pull off a speedo was classic! keep it up, please.
Date: July 09, 2007 11:17 pm Title: Closer, Closer
So I registered specifically so that I could review this story. Don't you feel honored:) Just kidding. I've been meaning to register forever, but I am horrible at reviewing so I kept putting it off, until this story compelled me to. Anyway...
Please continue! I am a huge fan of AU's, especially ones that get Jim and Pam together earlier, and most especially ones that get rid of the Karen factor. It's not so much that I hate Karen specifically (although, ok, I kinda do), but I kind of hate who Jim was when he was with her.
In conclusion (to my ridiculously long review), I am really enjoying this story and hate to see it end. I was a little sad that you skipped some episodes in there. In fact, I think you should keep going and make this even longer. If you do, I promise to review each chapter from now on. So, deal? No? *Sigh*, it was worth a try.
Author's Response: DEAL! :)
Date: July 09, 2007 10:43 pm Title: Closer, Closer
pleeeeeeease wrap it up good for us...liek a nice warm toasty Jam Sammich...you know you want to. ;)
Date: July 05, 2007 10:25 pm Title: I'll Never Leave You
I liked it, but I thought Kevin only knew Police songs, lol, update please!
Author's Response: umm... that song was a police song... I don't know fi someone else covered it or something (or if the police covered someone else), but that was on a police cd.
9 [Report This]Date: July 04, 2007 04:08 pm Title: ...I Know You Will Be There With Me
*Adds to faves* Absolutley perfect. I love it!
Date: July 01, 2007 01:33 am Title: ...I Know You Will Be There With Me
omg! i am tearing up like crazy! i love the spin u put on karen and roy then having pam comfront him about everything...amazing!