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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 09:39 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Reassurance

Oh, very nice!  I'm glad you left this in.

I think it's a good idea to NOT project what's going to happen in the chapters via the notes.  

Isn't that read count wonderful?  Congrats on how many people are reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 09:33 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Happy Birthday

Aww!  It's love.  I knew it.

It's actually kind of interesting - on the show, we've only seen Michael's birthday and Meredith's.  (And Jim's fake Hooters birthday.  Okay, "fake Hooters" made me think of Jan. This show has altered my brain.)  I'd love to see a celebration of Jim or Pam's birthdays in Season 4.

I love those last two lines. 



Author's Response:

I really want to see Jim and/or Pam's birthday in Season 4 too! I'm actually kind of surprised that they haven't done that yet. Unless by some stroke of chance both of their birthdays are in the summer. 

Haha, and I couldn't not make them fall in love with one another. :D That would just be mean. 

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 09:01 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Poison

Wow.  That's one of the lousiest ex-wives ever.  And, yes, it does make sense Jim would tell Pam.  He's hurting right now, plus, she should know what she's getting into.

I like "I don't have sex with drunken men"! 

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2007 08:53 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Heat of Winter

They're not in love with each other yet?  (Not yet, give it time.)

This was my favorite exchange from this chapter:

“Are you religious?”

“Not really.”

“That’s what I thought.”

I really enjoyed that!

Hmm...angst coming up, ey?  I'm guessing the ex-wife is coming around again.    

Reviewer: soverykitsch Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2007 09:14 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Happy Birthday

This is like Christmas! I leave for a few days, come back, and this story has been updated so much! Thank you! I absolutely love this, which you probably already know by now, but I think I'll keep telling you so that you'll keep updating.

Reviewer: BillionStanleyNickls Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2007 08:10 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Happy Birthday

i just want to let you know that you are awesome for updating so often! 

Author's Response:

Thank you! I like posting frequently mostly because I get really frustrated when I go to read a fic then realize it's not finished! Gah!!!

That and I honestly have nothing better to do with my time right now, so why not write and post frequently! 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I like posting frequently mostly because I get really frustrated when I go to read a fic then realize it's not finished! Gah!!!

That and I honestly have nothing better to do with my time right now, so why not write and post frequently?!



Author's Response: Did not mean to post that twice. :/

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2007 07:26 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Happy Birthday

OK, so I don't know if you're still unemployed, but if you are, here is what you should do: get a job at some store in a mall or something, and then on your downtime, WRITE A BOOK. I will buy it, as will everyone else who is on MTT, and then you will be rich. So...problem solved.

Author's Response:

Haha! I am still unemployed, and I actually have written a lot of non-fanfic stuff in the past. My dad is actually a writer (with one book published, another in the process of) so that's where I get my wicked fast writing skills from. :)

Maybe someday...someday. ;) 

Reviewer: alferz Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2007 07:03 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Happy Birthday

Two updates in one day! You spoil us so. Fabulous chapter, loved the ending. I'm bracing myself for the angst.. go easy on us! =P

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2007 03:33 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Poison

I really really liked this chapter. I still don't understand why Karen would be able to get any of his money legally. I mean, SHE cheated on him and had was pregnant with a child that WASN'T his during their marriage. He should be getting her money.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2007 01:18 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Poison

I am so hooked on your story and anxiously await each new chapter!  I am not a big fan of angst but as long as it ends in JAM fluff I will be a happy reader!

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2007 01:07 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Poison

Way to go Pam, way to be there for Jim. I really like to stuory and how fast you update these chapters. I like how Jim thought he was still going to get lucky that night.

Reviewer: Mad Hatter Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2007 12:50 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Poison

So that was.......intense! But definelty needed. I like how Pam was able to be there for Jim. It just shows how they are in a mature realtionship.

Now on to Karen............... What a f#@%$&* B$%&*@!!! OoOoOoOo you gt the perfect man and you cheat on him? O i don't think so. Can you write a Pam, Karen smack down? Pretty Pretty Please??!?! Someone needs to show Karen she is not all that with a bag of Herr's potato chips! lol. It seems like it is Karen's MO to find a wealthy man, use and abuse him and move along to the need sucka. Her poor child! Jim needs to stand up to her and be like B&*^$ Get Your Own Damn Money! She cheated on JIM! JIM!!!! she shouldn't be able to get a dime from him!!

So bravo and well done. I could easily continue on about the evilness of Karen and how Jim needs to grow a bigger set and not take this lying down(thats what she said!sorry couldn't help myself.) But I'm getting off track. Such a great chapter. I'm excited to read what will happen next so please post more soon!! 

 

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2007 12:44 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Heat of Winter

Great chapter. Pam seems to be pursuing him more. I like that. Great job with the lovin, not over the top and not to little. Of course I can't wait for more fluff to return.

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2007 12:28 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Poison

I am very relieved.  I was so worried it was going to be all sordid with like kids and money laundering and all kinds of mess...phew.

also, I felt queasy the entire chapter thinking about all that stinking tequila....uuugggh. bad times. 

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2007 11:11 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Poison

I promise I will never hurt you.  Knowing there are more angsty chapters ahead, this line has a rather ominous tone to me.  Another man's baby!  Seriously, Karen, WTF!  Awesome job, yet again

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2007 08:04 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Heat of Winter

I loved this chapter (and the last one)! They just make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Bring on the angst, the story's good either way.

Reviewer: cbk145 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2007 06:35 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Heat of Winter

I'm loving this story as a whole

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2007 06:19 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Heat of Winter

Yep, you're my favorite person today too.  This was sweet and I liked that it was just a little awkward.

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2007 01:06 am Title: Calm Before the Storm: Heat of Winter

Oh boy youve got more for us?? seriously? this story is just amazing.  I envy your ability to update quickly and to have such a drawn out plot...I mean 18 chapters and you've still got more?  I'm so very impressed.

Author's Response: I'm not going to lie. I surprised myself with the 18 chapters (and actually, I have up to 25 so far). I have no idea when I'm going to end...unfortunately, I also don't know how I'm going to end it. I keep getting these new ideas that pushes that ending back a little bit more! :/ Haha! I'm glad that you're enjoying it though, as long as you readers don't tire of it, I can keep going. :)

Reviewer: Beeswax Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2007 10:48 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Heat of Winter

I just spent the whole night reading all 18 chapters and this story is brilliant.

You have captured the essence of Jim and Pam so well.  This is one of the best AU fics I've ever read.

I'm so excited to see what will happen next.

PS:  I love that Karen is the wicked witch!

Reviewer: jinx Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2007 10:27 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Heat of Winter

Loved, loved, loved everything from the first kiss (do wonderfully descriptive I could feel it) to 'I think I could too'. 

Do you want to go upstairs? Absolutely I do.  Sweet and sexy hot at the same time.

The really off part of me was waiting for Jim to say 'Victory to the forces of democratic freedom' when he came.  Makes no sense in this story but it's and inside John Krasinski thing.

Reviewer: jinx Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2007 10:01 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Portraiture

I just keep picturing Pam's sketch of Dwight as the pervert.  Another great chapter.

Reviewer: Mad Hatter Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2007 09:10 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Heat of Winter

O DAMN! WOW! Ya you definetly out did yourself with this chapter. That wa amazing! lol so perfectly written and I got to the end and I'm thinking yes there will be more fluff and then I read your author's note. Why?!?1 who really needs agnst? not me....nope! lol but wow, I'm looking forward to what you have planned for us next. I'm just hoping for some JAM moments at Jim's work. I don't know what it is but i think there should definetly be some moments between Jim and Pam in his office. Ithink it must be the whole power and dominance thing but it could definetly add some sexual tension. But yes just simple..................wow.

and now I will be taking a cold shower.

Reviewer: Alamos Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2007 07:02 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Souvenirs

Your boredom... helped my boredom tonight... Off to read the next chapter

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2007 03:04 pm Title: Calm Before the Storm: Portraiture

You are so my favorite person today!  I love getting online and seeing that there is more of this story.  Keep up the good work!

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