10 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2009 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
LMAO @ Creed.
Date: June 16, 2007 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
That was a great Creed moment. I can picture it perfectly. Everything is quiet and then you hear Creed shouting out something from the '60s. So great!!
Author's Response: Heeee, thanks!
Date: June 14, 2007 03:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
Creed FTW! He is surely the most fun to write of all the characters I think. Way to break up the tension with him :)
Author's Response: Heee, thank you! I love Creed.
Date: June 12, 2007 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 3
Wow! This is like a butterfly flapping its wings and everything's different!
You have me way-intrigued where this is going.
Author's Response: Ooh, I love that as a description of an a/u! And thanks, I hope it doesn't disappoint. :)
Date: June 12, 2007 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is a really good story. I didn't know that companies can have no-union policies. That's just silly.
Author's Response: Thank you! And oh yeah, companies can be insanely anti-union; Wal-Mart, for instance, won't let its employees go to the bathroom at the same time or fraternize outside work, and has fired people for doing so, they're that afraid of a union being formed. Unions aren't perfect, but that's pretty messed up. And, uh, I'll get off my soapbox now!
10 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2007 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 3
I really like this. It's very different, but it sort of gives another look into why Pam shouldn't have been with Roy. I think the characterizations here are spot-on, and I adore your Pam. Yay!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yay Pam! And you!
Date: June 12, 2007 10:55 am Title: Chapter 3
You updated! Never find your self-restraint, okay? For me. Things sure did happen, and I'm just loving this, from the little Drug Testing details (why the whole can of Coke cold in her lap made me tear up a little is beyond me, but I guess I'm just a mess), to Creed and the Hawaii/Mexico debate and oh, everything. <3<3<3
Author's Response: Yeah, I only made it like three hours later than yesterday. :( But yaaay, you liked it, thanks! And oh, man, I'm pretty sure the can of Coke on the show DESTROYED MY ABILITY to function as a human being for several months, so it's a powerful soda?
Date: June 12, 2007 10:53 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh MAN, Kyra. So excited -- I don't think anyone in the fandom has done anything even close to this. Can't wait to see where you take this!
And I'm loving the backstory on all those moments we already know -- how Pam bought the coke (accidentally typed "cock" there; good job, self), the fight about the honeymoon -- yes. Love.
Author's Response: HAHA, Pam buying cock -- THAT is a different fic altogether. Thanks, I'm really glad you're liking this!
9 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2007 10:51 am Title: Chapter 3
Man, I'm loving this. The whole Hawaii vs. Mexico and Roy snapping at her and everything that was SO Pam and Roy last year. I love how this has a serious tone, since it's something we never really see explored in fic, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks, dude! Poor Pam and Roy, I think they had all these good moments, but then so many icky ones. Doooomed.
Author's Response: (And oh, next they all run away and join the circus. True story!)
10 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2007 10:24 am Title: Chapter 3
Ahhhh, dude, the section you added with Roy snapping at her is SO GOOD. That misunderstanding, and the not-clicking - perfect. This whole story is so delicate and sad - just awesome.
Author's Response: THANKS! It was hard to desympathize him, but doesn't it suck when you think you're joking around about something and the other person DOES NOT? (...kind of like Steve Carell and that baboon.)
Date: June 12, 2007 10:10 am Title: Chapter 3
Listen, I have no clue how a union is formed, so it made perfect sense to me :) I love how you are incorporating things that happened in episodes (Jinx), but in a way that it's not prominant. Very cool.
Author's Response: Hee, good! And ooh, I really hoped people would realize that's what the can of Coke was about, so yay. :)
8 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2007 09:48 am Title: Chapter 3
How funny that Creed signed the petition for a union. Does Jim think she's backing it too? (Now, thanks to this chapter I have the "Look for the union label" song running throug my head. I wondering if I am dating myself by admitting that?)
Author's Response:
I think you could read it as either him thinking she knew something about it (which is what my beta thought, and, well, she did, although I don't think she knew this is what would happen) or him just looking at her because everyone else is upset about losing their jobs, and she's what he doesn't wnat to lose. ... to be super sappy about it. ;)
Heh, I ended up doing a ton of reading on the history of union slogans while writing this so no, it fits right in!
Date: June 12, 2007 09:47 am Title: Chapter 3
Okay, I am loving this. Please update every day forever :) I can't WAIT to see what happens!!
Author's Response: Hee, thank you! Haha, updating every day forever.... chapters 27-35 are actually just the legal documents used to incorporate a union, that's cool, right?
Date: June 12, 2007 09:45 am Title: Chapter 3
Ohhhh, Kyra. This fucking hurts. It's fantastic and it's killing me.
Hawaii vs. Mexico and Roy, when he was kind of a douche, and Jim when he was still so in love with Pam and PAM, oh, poor, sweet Pam. The branch shutting down and auuuugh. I think I just died from how much this punched me in the stomach.
Author's Response: Thank youuuu! I'm sorry I punched you in the stomach. But only a little. ;)