Date: June 13, 2007 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 4
God this is so good. I'm so happy that you are posting every daaay :) My Super Sweet Sixteen! Hee!
But seriously, this is so real and the tone of it is perfect. And I will continue to fangirl over every new chapter, so keep em comin!
Author's Response: Yes, ma'am! <3 <3 <3
Date: June 13, 2007 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
Kyra,
I'm loving how you so skillfully intertwine the canon with your story. All the little things such as the Coke, the Christmas card, the Hawaii/Mexico debate; when I come upon them in my reading, I just smile because it makes the story so much more meaningful and real if you know what I mean.
And poor Pam, she's just trying so hard to continually mold herself into what Roy wants at any given moment. When it gets to be too much, she's got Jim to turn to. Great feel for the whole S2 dynamic.
Looking foward to the rest of this!
T
Author's Response: Whee, thank you so much for such nice feedback! So glad you're liking this.
Date: June 13, 2007 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 4
I really enjoyed this chapter! I loved the part with Kenny's family, and how Pam has this whole life with Roy. I think a lot of the time that dynamic gets discarded in our excitement to hook up Jam, but I really loved it in this chapter! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Oh, yay, that's EXACTLY what I was going for, so this made me super happy, thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 10:45 am Title: Chapter 4
!!!!!! This made my DAY (sad? No, not sad.) You should, uh, post another chapter later today just because. Gah. Everything is so subtle and perfect - I had to reread the part about his glove compartment 3 times before it hit me what that card was, good Jesus. And all of the reactions (Ryan, haha) and poor Toby getting yelled at all of the time, and Kelly being Kelly.
Okay, and this:
"No," she says, and after a moment he reaches over and rests his hand on her foot without looking at her while he changes the channel.
I don't know, it hit me as a perfect little sentence that explains the Roy/Pam dynamic. I love you, have I told you that lately?
Author's Response: <3 <3 <3 <3 x 1million. Thank youuuu! Haha, SORRY I did not post 17 parts yesterday, but the next part's going to be super long, if that's any consolation.
Date: June 13, 2007 10:03 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh, I hope you keep updating this every day forever. That would be ideal.
Love Jim and Pam's drive (is that his Christmas card to her??? [and !!!]) and the sadness of pending unemployment and Ryan's cheerfulness.
You call Roy's sister both Lisa and Linda at the end, FYI.
Author's Response:
Heeee, War and Peace: The Jim/Pam Story. And yes, it totally is!! I was worried I hadn't made it clear enough so I'm so glad you got it.
Linda?! I have no idea what you're talking about. (Heee, THANK you, fixed it.)
8 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 09:52 am Title: Chapter 4
I squeed in my head (cos I'm at work) when she actually had her hands on the card. So close.... And how Ryan is it that he looks cheerful, but he's still a temp at this point so that makes sense.
Author's Response: I'm so psyched that it makes sense that's what it is! Thanks, glad you're liking. :)
10 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 09:36 am Title: Chapter 4
Jim keeps the card in his car? Very dangerous. I love this. It's AU but the characters are still totally, fully themselves. It's very cool.
Author's Response: YAY I was so hoping it would be obvious what that was! Thanks!
Date: June 13, 2007 09:22 am Title: Chapter 4
I am really enjoying this and love how you have incorporated moments we've seen on the show into something so completely different. So well done.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!