Date: June 18, 2007 08:40 pm Title: Chapter 7
Nice chapter! It was really weird to read about them kind of "life after DM", but you did it really well. I had to stop and think about just how weird it would be for Pam, and for all of them, to come back for one last interview, hoping not to see Michael's car there and stuff. I don't know, that part just got me.
And I thought you wrote Roy very well. You got the awkwardness, but it was also the little things, like Roy and Pam starting to speak at the same time, Roy getting up when Jim walked in...things like that.
Looking forward to more!
10 [Report This]Date: June 18, 2007 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 7
YAY. Awesome as usual...everything that we love about S2 is all here and the story itself is so original and perfectly in character! This is so much fun to read.
Date: June 18, 2007 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh, this is the stuff we missed last summer -- the details about getting on with your life after the end of such a long relationship (Pam's plans to give Roy's niece her old lunchbox, the way Roy's hand looks without his ring). I like that you have Roy moving out here, not Pam.
"Shut up," she says. "I read books."
SUCH a Pam thing to say. :D
And Pam and Jim teaming up on Dwight -- am I right in thinking it sounds eerily like Jim lives in Godric's Hollow? -- and oh, man, I hope they get to the making out soon. :D and <3.
10 [Report This]Date: June 18, 2007 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 7
Dude, I love this - it's so tentative and wistful and delicate, and the awkwardness is just right. Faaaabulous.
Date: June 18, 2007 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 7
Great! I totally didn't get that you were referencing HP until the green light thing. Heeee
Date: June 18, 2007 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh wow this is good. That wasn't surprise just happiness. I just love your tone and the fact that you mix up the angst with fun and also I can't wait to see what happens with Jim and Pam!!! Plus it was great to see Dwight. I hope the Ministry of Magic tracks him down before he can report his findings to all the other Muggles. ;)
Date: June 18, 2007 11:18 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh, hee, owls. I love them messing with Dwight...and Jim not knowing and Pam not knowing what to say. This just keeps being so good!
Date: June 18, 2007 10:09 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh, so compelling! Where eeeez theeeese gooooing?!?
Date: June 18, 2007 08:44 am Title: Chapter 7
Homg, the awkwardness of this chapter is just palpable. SO good! I just love how this is an AU where I really feel like I'm watching some sort of alternate season 2. <333
10 [Report This]Date: June 18, 2007 08:18 am Title: Chapter 7
Oh, that awkward first meet up after the break-up, fighting against familiarity and wanting to cry...and then there's still Jim, and it's just all SO GOOD. <3<3<3<3<3<3<3