8 [Report This]Date: June 20, 2007 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 8
This chapter made me so giddy - I just adore new love and romance and Jim and Pam kissing. So romantic.
Date: June 20, 2007 06:12 am Title: Chapter 8
Ahhhh! You totally captured that weird, surreal giddiness about them finally realizing it's okay for them to be together. I love it! It's totally making me think about what happened in the finale this season and I totally want that feeling to be palpable when we get to see them again. (I don't know if it will, but I want it - I love this feeling!)
My favorite part about this chapter was Jim's line: "Can you stop the car?" Because, yes. Why are they still driving? This needs to be real and oh my God, suddenly it is real and wow.
I also liked how Pam was feeling kind of sick as she's trying to get the words out; I know I would be very nervous if I was her. Awesome job!!!
Date: June 19, 2007 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 8
Great story, I have been enjoying this story for awhile. I love stories that deal w/ the characters when there is no more DM. Because in my world even without DM, Pam and Jim their way back to each other.
Date: June 19, 2007 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 8
Aw, this was a sweet ending for Jim/Pam, believable and honest, giving them time to take a break from each other, sort themselves out, and find there way back. I am, however, still kind of devastated over the fall of Dunder Mifflin and the lack of certainty in everyone's futures, so if there's more, I hope it's an epilogue where everyone gets a new job, Scrantonicity gets a record deal, Dwight/Angela get married, Michael moves in with Jan, and everyone agrees to keep in touch and have weekly meetings to watch themselves on TV in the fall! ;) Or maybe that's asking a bit much...
Date: June 19, 2007 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 8
Oh, you've decided to skip over the agony of season 3 and get right to the smoochin', I see. A wise decision.
<3, obvs.
Date: June 19, 2007 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 8
THE END? (Almost.)
Oh, don't break my heart, kyrafic. (Please?) I'd like to think almost all paths would have led to them getting together.
10 [Report This]Date: June 19, 2007 11:20 am Title: Chapter 8
Yay! I loved this. Can't wait to see how you finish it up!
10 [Report This]Date: June 19, 2007 10:01 am Title: Chapter 8
"Yeah," lis says. "This is good." Seriously, wow. Stealing his car is better than firewalking, I guess! So, so nicely done!
Date: June 19, 2007 09:40 am Title: Chapter 8
Finally had a chance to catch up on this - it's still so good. I love how such a strong sense of the characters is conjured so simply, without making them simple (e.g., Roy isn't the usual big oaf from central casting.) And this last chapter tugged the heartstrings in such an understated way. Lovely.
10 [Report This]Date: June 19, 2007 09:39 am Title: Chapter 8
So I read this at work, grinning like an idiot, and when my phone rang I answered it "unhhhhhh". You are my favorite forever, I can't remember the last time I read a Jim/Pam story that made me all weird and twirly. <33333333
Date: June 19, 2007 09:23 am Title: Chapter 8
Very few things have ever made me giddy at work. This is definitely one of them. Just perfect with Pam driving his car and trying not to look at him, and Jim taking her seatbelt off. So lovely.
Date: June 19, 2007 09:23 am Title: Chapter 8
No!!! Not the end! Never the end! I think you should ban those two words from your vocabulary. Or at least suspend them just for this story. Well, no, I'm not sure how practical it would be to ban the word the. But anyway, I've really enjoyed this, and I just don't want it to be over yet. Thanks for another great chapter!
9 [Report This]Date: June 19, 2007 09:05 am Title: Chapter 8
Yeah, uh. This made my insides all flippy. Who AM I? Heeeee.
Date: June 19, 2007 09:04 am Title: Chapter 8
NO! NOT THE END (ALMOST)!!!