1 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2020 03:31 pm Title: Epilogue
While I will admit I don't love that the inciting incident of Pam and Roy splitting is Roy standing up for workers' rights (sorry to get political on you), the consequences are realistic for an already flawed relationship, and this AU is just so well developed.
Wherever you are, I hope you're still writing.
10 [Report This]Date: February 20, 2010 04:58 pm Title: Epilogue
Kyrafic, first, allow me to apologize for not reading and reviewing this story sooner. Truth be told, I was kinda put off by the title initially. Well, not put off, it just didn't grab me. Silly me! What's that expression about books and covers? ; )
This was such a treat. I enjoyed reading it from start to finish. I could have kept on reading it if you kept on writing. You perfectly captured the essence of these characters. The rooftop confession made my heart skip a beat. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm very glad you enjoyed it all. Especially the rooftop bit. :)
Date: June 21, 2007 01:54 pm Title: Epilogue
That was amaaaaaazing! Aww, I feel all warm and gooey now. Hee hee. You have such a wonderful writing style, I hope to read more of your work! :)
Date: June 21, 2007 11:47 am Title: Epilogue
It's wonderful. The world is wide open for them now that they are together- and especially in this AU, where they are free of DM. Thank you for this wonderful story!
Date: June 21, 2007 09:26 am Title: Epilogue
This is awesome. I love the way you ended this here and left it so open. Great job on this whole story! You're such a great writer! ;)
9 [Report This]Date: June 21, 2007 06:16 am Title: Epilogue
Guh. This is so true to the characters- that Jim and Pam would be kind of in disbelief that everything is working out. She doesn't say what she's thinking, how that was almost them, how they would have just been stories about old coworkers. Their lives going on and on, just like everyone else's is right now. LOVE that line. You are a shining STAR! <3
Date: June 21, 2007 03:50 am Title: Epilogue
Great epilogue! I love the little glimpse into where they all go from here - Creed disappearing altogether was perfect. And Jim and Pam are so cute with their near-disbelief and wonderment that this has actually worked out for them :)
Date: June 20, 2007 09:37 pm Title: Epilogue
Wonderful!! I love the bit about Creed...he's so mysteriou...and weird! Haha! I also loved the part ""I'll call you tomorrow," he says for the third time". That was cute. Almost like he can't believe it's happening and trying to reasure himself it's real, and some nervousness, too!
Amazing job!
Date: June 20, 2007 08:38 pm Title: Epilogue
This was delightful! You do Jim and Pam so well.
Date: June 20, 2007 07:36 pm Title: Epilogue
OH HAI MY HEART, IT BROKE. WITH JOY.
Seriously, the awkwardness and also the rightness of Jim and Pam and the way things don't fall perfectly into place, the possibilities they both have, in every area of their lives... so perfect.