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Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2008 08:07 pm Title: Two

Aw, this one's really sad, but I'm glad he at least has someone. Penny sounds sweet. =)

Reviewer: bebitched Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16, 2008 02:51 pm Title: Two

I'm glad you didn't make Jim miserable. I think I probably would have cried. Great job! I can't wait for the next installment.

Reviewer: Emilys List Anonymous 7 [Report This]
Date: February 16, 2008 07:32 am Title: Two

what a cool idea! i love this concept. and i'm glad you made jim happy-ish without pam - but also capable of needing to get drunk, as we all do when old heartbreak comes back, from time to time. i'm really interested to see other variants of this, and i'd love to see you really push the concept to give us some interesting character studies. also, and perhaps everything is really planned out already, but what if we saw jim's 35th bday from pam's perspective - and she wasn't with him? just a twist. i don't usually tell an author how to write their story - so please forgive my pushy advise!

Author's Response:

you are not being pushy at all.  I really love this story and I'm trying to come up with other ways to do it.  I might make a Pam version, or do what you said and see where Pam is on all of Jim's 35th birthdays.  Definately something to think about :)

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Petty Signed [Report This]
Date: February 16, 2008 07:21 am Title: Two

Is she based off of...Rita from Dexter?

I liked this part. Jim and Jim Jr. Adorable.



Author's Response: YOU WIN!!!!!  Congrats!  I will be PMing you for your real name and I'm going to write you into my story "Open Waters"  haha...I'm so excited someone got it! :)

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