1 [Report This]Date: March 27, 2023 09:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Love the premise! A brilliant idea. I like how Pam smiled when she smell Jim’s sense without really knowing it is the smell of Jim.
1 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2018 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
Rereading this off the ebook download and I still love it. I especially like that there's no reason it can't still be canon-compliant; since Pam's glimpse is its own AU where she didn't stay WIT H Roy after Cugino's, the fact that it conflicts with later seasons' versions of their family isn't a problem.
Date: August 04, 2007 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please update when you can! I really love this series.
Author's Response:
Ask and ye shall recieve...several weeks later...
:)
Date: July 04, 2007 10:56 am Title: Chapter 1
I just read the newest chapter. I know you said it was "fluff," but I actually got the chills when Pam stepped out onto her terrace. Well done, and I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Yay! I can't know how happy that makes me. :)
Date: July 04, 2007 08:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Sigh. I love this story so much. I've never seen the movie that it's based on, so I have no idea what's going to happen next. Please keep it up, I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: June 24, 2007 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
oh, this is adorable already. i love that the cologne was her first hint that something was amiss. can't wait to read on.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you like it.
10 [Report This]Date: June 20, 2007 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like your writing style; it's not brilliant, but it's a lot more readable than a lot of the stuff on here. I love this concept and this is currently my favorite read! I've just never reviewed (I don't think...)
Author's Response: Yay I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reading.
Date: June 19, 2007 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh! This is really great and fun. I love that everything is familiar to her, but she is confused, still. And I especially love that his cologne is her favorite smell. Nice.
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: June 19, 2007 10:30 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG!!! Has this story been here for a long time? This is a very very good story, it kept me on the edge of my seat, lol. Please update very soon! Like tonight soon... :]
Author's Response: Thanks! It's been up I think about a week, maybe. I'll do my best to get the next chapter up as soon as possible! Thanks for reading!
Date: June 13, 2007 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is really an interesting idea for a story. I'm looking forward to seeing more.
Author's Response: Thanks. More is coming, I promise.
Date: June 13, 2007 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is really good. I love it. I am also dying for the next chapter and I just read the first two. Great!!
Author's Response: Ok, well please don't die! :) But I'm glad you like it. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: June 13, 2007 11:31 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I like this idea. And you're very descriptive, which I like. The first paragraph made me want to go back to bed. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thank you. I've always had a problem with telling rather than showing, which is a big no-no, so I think I'm over compensating. I'm glad you're enjoying it!
10 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 08:47 am Title: Chapter 1
It's a good concept, and so far I'm hooked! Please post chapter 2 soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: June 13, 2007 07:15 am Title: Chapter 1
this sounds exciting! i love her immediate acceptance and comfort in the smell, then her hesitation when she realizes that it's Jim's. I can't wait to see where you take this. you're off to a great start.
Author's Response: Thanks!
8 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2007 05:38 am Title: Chapter 1
Yeah I kinda like that movie too, shhhh. Great idea, ready for more.
Author's Response: Haha, I won't tell. Thanks for the review!
Date: June 12, 2007 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Bring on more! I really enjoyed this! I thought at first it was a one-shot, so I was disappointed that I wouldn't get to read more but from the reviews I can see it's continuing...yay!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I am typing up the next chapter right now!
Date: June 12, 2007 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oooh. I really like this. I have to admit that Nicholas Cage movie is a total guilty pleasure of mine. I can't wait to read more and see where this fic goes. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Definitely a guilty pleasure of mine, too. I'm glad you like what I've got. More is on the way. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: June 12, 2007 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Are you kidding me? You know I love your stories enough to want to know what happens next - pronto. And this one is seriously no exception, because I'm literally bouncing in my seat, and I was squealing it'sjimit'sjimit'sJIM, so. :P Does that prove things?
I love! Can't wait to see what's happened and what happens and what'll happen, too.
Author's Response: Hahaha. Thanks! Your review has me grinning like a fool. You've definitely proven it. Thanks again!
Date: June 12, 2007 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
So unique but still erring on the fluffy side (just my guess! ;) LOL!)
You did a lovely job setting the scene and who doesn't love shirtless!Jim?
Continue. Soon. :)
Author's Response: I know I love shirtless!Jim. And fluff, so expect some of that. Thanks for the review! Next part will be up soon.
8 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2007 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please do continue - I love this first chapter and am anxious to see where it goes. I've never seen Family Man, I assume it is a wonderfully fluffy love story?
Author's Response: Oh, there will definitely be fluff. :) Thanks for the review!
Date: June 12, 2007 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG! OMG! Holy smokes, you should definitely continue! I almost missed this, but wow! Great idea and I am enjoying what you have written so far. Cannot WAIT to see how it plays out.
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for the very enthusiastic review! I'm glad you liked what I have so far.
Date: June 12, 2007 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great concept...so clever that my first thought was, how come no one's done this before? Pam's slow realization as she wakes up that something's not quite right really comes across. Looking forward to seeing what's next.
Author's Response: Thanks! I really thought someone would have done this sooner, too, but I'm glad I get to be the one to do it!
10 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2007 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
I can imagine that this would be hard to write. Trying to keep it realistic and not too far out there. I think that you should keep going. I haven't seen The Family Man, but I think that this is good so far.
Author's Response:
Thanks. And you should check out that movie. It's cute.
Author's Response:
Thanks. And you should check out that movie. It's cute.
Date: June 12, 2007 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, what an amazing start! I really love the concept, and your incredible attention to detail. I'm anxious to read what happens nex, please update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it. I really like the concept, too. I was sort of hoping someone else would write it so I could just read it and not have to do any of the work. Haha. I'll get the next part up soon.