Date: July 01, 2007 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is the first time i've stumbled upon this story and I love it. I love Pam's confusion...it's annoyingly adorable. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: June 21, 2007 03:43 am Title: Chapter 4
Aw, I think it's absolutely believable that Jim would start to get frustrated with her acting so strange and forgetful for no apparent reason in his eyes, but I love that he realized when she really needed comfort.
Author's Response: Thanks! I think I would get frustrated if I were so him. Thanks for the review!
Date: June 21, 2007 12:34 am Title: Chapter 4
Man this is craziness. I'd be losing my mind at this point! Can't wait for more....also for some reason i think it's SO cute that they go to baseball games as a little family....so adorable.
Author's Response: I thought that would be a cute detail, something about their lives that could happen. Thanks for the review!
Date: June 20, 2007 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
Okay, I hope this turns into more than just "a glimpse". Her life is so much better with Jim. Let's see how she deals with the kids and everything at the game!
I like how you made Pam really hesitant and weary of getting involved with the kids. I think that when she had the children her mothering instincts kicked in and she's a great mom, but if she doesn't remember having them then I think she'd be acting how she is here. If that makes sense...so great job!
Author's Response: That makes sense! Thanks!
Date: June 20, 2007 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
Yayy! Another great update. You're doing a really wonderful job of capturing Pam's character in this really extreme situation. I totally believe everything that she's thinking and feeling. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. That really means a lot. More is on the way!
10 [Report This]Date: June 20, 2007 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
Eeee! I'm so excited to see Pam just go with it! Especially if Jim wants to get frisky ;)
Author's Response: Haha. We'll see. ;)
Date: June 20, 2007 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 4
Very interesting! I never saw that movie, so I don't know how this is going to go at all. I like it though! I can definitely see that one of the oddest things would be having children you don't remember.
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I think that would be pretty strange. Thanks for the review!
Date: June 20, 2007 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 4
I cannot wait for more interactions between Pam and the kids! Yay.
Author's Response: They're comning up! Thanks for reading.
Date: June 20, 2007 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is so good... I love that by the end of this chapter she's content, then all of a sudden remembers Roy. It's so obvious Pam! She loves him. She just needs to be ok with that :) I was so excited when I saw you had updated. This is so wonderful!
Author's Response: Thanks! :) I think it's obvious, too. Pam (in the story) just needs to realize that.