Date: July 08, 2007 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 5
This story is great! I hope you have the internet and update soon!! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Date: July 06, 2007 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 5
Aww, cute! She kind of seems to be getting a hang of this 'mom' stuff. I'm curious about this house as well...
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: July 05, 2007 09:31 am Title: Chapter 5
i love this so much! i feel like i say that every time i review, but i really just love it. she's such a great mom and she doesn't even know it. i really hope the internet works for you b/c i can't wait for more :) great chapter!
Author's Response: That is quite alright. You just can't hear that too many times. :) But, really, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Date: July 04, 2007 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yayy! I really love this story and I'm so glad that you updated... I love how naturally Pam is fitting into her new life. I can't wait to read more and find out what happens next!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you like it!
Date: July 04, 2007 07:22 pm Title: Chapter 5
Yay! I can't wait for this to be updated again...I can't seem to get enough. I can't wait until Jim kisses her so she can see what she's missing!
Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate the review.
Date: July 04, 2007 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 5
I just saw this story and read all the chapters. I really like The Family Man as well, and think it's great that you're writing a Jim and Pam take on it. Can't wait to see what happens next--if Pam has her talk with Jim or if she remembers anything else. It really is cute for all of them to take in a Phillies game. Jim is so sweet here and it seems like all of Pam's dreams have come true. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it.
Date: July 04, 2007 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
I was so excited to find an update of this story! Thanks!
Pam's uncertainty and uneasiness is so Pam, and then her familiarity is so perfect for the situation you've created here.
Really enjoyable premise and really well written!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
10 [Report This]Date: July 04, 2007 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
I love this story so much! So, so much! :D
And I can just picture Maddie's failed attempt of a ponytail -- very cute, quite funny.
I'm really curious to see where this leads and how it will end. I keep thinking of the movie (bad of me, probably, yes) and I don't want her to leave the the life that she should have gone with! *sniff* So...yeah, I'm always interested in where it's going to lead. :D
Good job!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: July 04, 2007 10:29 am Title: Chapter 5
Awww! Jim got her the house she wanted with a terrace! I like that Pam somehow knows the little things, like where her clothes are in the dresser, just not how she knows them. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: July 04, 2007 05:21 am Title: Chapter 5
Pam's terrace! That is adorable. I'm loving this story and the details of Pam learning to deal with her family all over again...
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Date: July 04, 2007 04:46 am Title: Chapter 5
The only problem with this story is that there isn't more of it yet. Oh and a teensy typo - Pam groans as Jim throws a couple of diapers into the bad.
I can imagine this whole scenario and it puts a huge goofy smile on my face. Well done! More please!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and for letting me know about that typo! It's all fixed so that it now makes sense. :)
Date: July 04, 2007 12:11 am Title: Chapter 5
Oooh I have to tell you I loved so much about what this chapter chose to be. So much beautifully FILLING fluff! First off, those kids are delicious. There was something about Jim just depositing his mini-me into her lap and saying "here's this" lol that made me laugh and so sweet when she had to put sunscreen on his pudgy arms. UGH. I can't wiat for the next chapter. I NEED to know why Pam doesn't remember!
Author's Response: I know you reviewed a long time ago, but even after this long I STILL appreciate it. So thanks! That was one of my favorite parts.