Date: January 30, 2008 07:59 pm Title: Booze Cruise
Wow. Timing really makes such a big difference, doesn't it?
Date: August 14, 2006 02:53 am Title: Booze Cruise
Jim grabbed her wrist and pulled her in close to whisper, “You owe me, Beesly.”
Oooh.
Don't you just hate it when you get stuck when writing?
Author's Response:
I would totally melt.
I'm not going to say for sure, but I think I may have broken the writer's block for this story...
Date: August 11, 2006 09:33 pm Title: Booze Cruise
Aw...I liked this a lot. :) If only this is how it would have happened....*sigh* Great story!
Author's Response: Aww, yeah, I know. That's really why I wrote it: self-indulgence.
Date: August 11, 2006 05:47 pm Title: Booze Cruise
That was just such a lovely alternate scenario for Booze Cruise. Loved it. I do hope you continue the story in this universe.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm considering a continuation.
Date: August 11, 2006 03:39 pm Title: Booze Cruise
Good start, both with this fanfic, and with fanfic-ing in general!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it!
Date: August 11, 2006 02:52 pm Title: Booze Cruise
Great alternate ending! You kept true to the pace of the actual episode (like Michael being put on the brig, hehe!) I think it works as a one-shot, but its your call. I would like to see Jim get that kiss Pam owes him thought...
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you liked the brig scene--it made me smile.
Date: August 11, 2006 02:25 pm Title: Booze Cruise
Nice alternate ending!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: August 11, 2006 01:41 pm Title: Booze Cruise
Great alternative ending to Booze Cruise. I would love to see where you would go with this.
Author's Response: Thanks--I have a little more, but I've blanked now, so I guess I'll just let it stew a little. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: August 11, 2006 01:15 pm Title: Booze Cruise
hehehe! i'm very giddy after reading this.
great job for your first fanfic! and this should not, i repeat NOT, be a one-shot. please continue!
Author's Response:
Yay! I'm glad you liked it!
I've actually done HP and VMars fic before, just not Office. I have a second chapter, but then I'm stuck, so...we'll see.
Thanks for reviewing!