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Reviewer: Mel60 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 22, 2006 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 2

"The therapist, with his notepad and his socks and his assumptions" - seriously one of the best lines I've ever read.  I'm jealous of how you could write something like this.  It's simple and complex and funny and dry and perfect. 

Author's Response: Wow. Thanks so much. :)

Reviewer: lano Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2006 02:04 am Title: Chapter 2

Wow, this is really... I don't know.  Amazing.  I'm so impressed by the way this flows.  Ok, I'mma shut it.

Reviewer: halfbaked Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 2

Is it wrong that my heart breaks for someone who's not real?
I love the title. It captures just how dark Jim's inner life has grown.
Incredible piece of writing!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 2

You've made me think about how hard Christmas could be for Jim. Next one is Booze Cruise, right? Can't wait to see if you'll do pre or post...or both.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 2

What a great line - "Instead he can’t help but feel as if maybe he’s trapped inside of a snow globe."  

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love this.  And I'm glad to have Jim working through all of this because he is so sensitive and shouldn't get broken down by a girl, no matter how wonderful she is.

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 2

I really enjoy this format, especially since I'm making a go at "Brief Interviews" too.  I'm interested in seeing where this will go.

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 2

As I said over on TWoP.  Ouchies.  I mean that in the best possible way.  My heart breaks in two with every word - and there's nothing wrong with that - it just proves that what you've written has gotten to me.  Keep going.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 2

I was infuriated when he thought the therapist wrote "infatuation". Does that mean I'm into JAM too deep?! I love this story for its darkness. Devastating and beautiful.

Reviewer: proposals Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 13, 2006 04:58 pm Title: Chapter 2

Jim is too wonderful to feel this way. This makes me hate Pam, just a little. It's sad because watching the show, you can tell that he does feel like this, at least sometimes. The dissatisfaction with his job, his life.

This is wonderful. I can't wait for the next update.

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