Date: January 04, 2007 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 3
he’d sunk his teeth into the corner of his pillow and cried for two hours until he felt lightheaded and fell asleep.
This line makes me want to shoot somebody for making this poor guy feel so bad.
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 06:14 am Title: Chapter 3
This made me cry:
How he’d come home that night, barely managed to slip off his shoes and fallen into bed. How he’d sunk his teeth into the corner of his pillow and cried for two hours until he felt lightheaded and fell asleep.
10 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2006 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 3
"...as long as there’s her, I’m not going anywhere." - that sums up Jim perfectly.
10 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2006 08:47 am Title: Chapter 3
wow..this is really interesting. I haven't read IWHM but I'm not having any trouble with this style. Well done.
10 [Report This]Date: August 23, 2006 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 3
I'm really enjoying this. I can feel all of Jim's emotions in your writing. Excellent work.
10 [Report This]Date: August 23, 2006 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is just really, really awesome.
10 [Report This]Date: August 23, 2006 09:28 am Title: Chapter 3
i love this series!! it's really great and also could help explain some of jim's behavior. keep it up!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 23, 2006 07:26 am Title: Chapter 3
Wow. This is really, really good. Of course, it's so angsty and painful that I really hope there's at least a semi-happy ending somewhere...
10 [Report This]Date: August 23, 2006 05:22 am Title: Chapter 3
Just wanted to chime in to say that I've really been enjoying this story. This isn't an easy format to write in (except maybe for DFW!) and you're pulling it off really well. Sad and lovely. Hoping for more chapters soon.
10 [Report This]Date: August 23, 2006 05:01 am Title: Chapter 3
This concept works so well because a) you rock as a storyteller and b) the things you have Jim reveal to "the" therapist are what we can see on his face. JK's so expressive that you pretty much know that this is what's going on under the surface. Thanks so much for putting words to those looks.
Sad, painful and sadly, incredibly true.
10 [Report This]Date: August 22, 2006 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
I absolutely love this chapter (and this story). Jim just feels very true to character, because this is what he would find on the show if he allowed himself to dig a little deeper. It is such an interesting and different way to tell the story, and yet it absolutely feel like the Jim we know..
10 [Report This]Date: August 22, 2006 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 3
I just wanted to let you know that I've been reading this story and I think it's fantastic. The characterization is so interesting and really original, which is nice - it kind of feels like you're reading a piece of original fiction, not fanfic, though of course at the same time his character rings really true to the show. Which makes absolutely no sense. Oh well.
So yeah. I'm really, really enjoying reading it. It's much better than basically any other fanfic I've been reading.
10 [Report This]Date: August 22, 2006 08:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
Interesting chapter. I am anxious to see more of this.
10 [Report This]Date: August 22, 2006 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
Is it bad that I find depressed Jim really fucking sexy? Enough of my weirdness. I love this story! You do such a great job of conveying the stifling atmosphere of a therapist's office. And I really like what he reveals to the doctor juxtaposed with what he doesn't. Couldn't wait to read this chapter :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 22, 2006 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 3
“Yeah. I might get a dog.”
I don't know why, but that was the saddest part of the whole story. Sniff.
Author's Response: Yes. That was one of the saddest lines for me to write. Just imagining a lonely Jim without Pam and without his roommate, just this dog for companionship. Sigh.
10 [Report This]Date: August 22, 2006 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 3
Mmm, I love that last sentence. The way you write is really... just, beautiful, I guess. It's really subdued but still packed with so much emotion, and you keep things fairly short and direct but reading it, you still get it so completely that it makes you want to cry. I kind of want to write paragraphs just gushing about how talented you are and how wonderful, perfect this is, but it would probably be creepy and I'm not sure that there are enough words for how much praise this deserves.
Really, it's just awesome. </stalker-esque rambling>
Author's Response: Aw. Thank you so much. You're too sweet. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 22, 2006 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 3
i know you said you weren't sure about this chapter, but i thought it was amazing. you use the format really effectively--giving the reader just enough information. and the way you write jim just breaks me every time...gorgeous & heartbreaking as usual.
Date: August 22, 2006 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is all just so exquisitely painful. He's such a romantic and he's so wracked with pain and you just do a fabulous job capturing all of it.