10 [Report This]Date: October 29, 2007 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
The bit about the chocolate and peppermints just cracked me up. Too much funniness.
You know, you do conversations really well. And I'm just realizing that you don't always do conversations. And this whole thing is a one-sided conversation. And its better than most dialogues I read.
Therapists suck. Well, mine did so I quit going.
Date: January 04, 2007 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 4
plenty of people like me just fine, but none of them know me at all
*wince* Poor Jim. Such a telling thing for him to realize. Or to say. Good line.
10 [Report This]Date: October 22, 2006 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 4
really facinating! I hope we get more! ;)
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 06:21 am Title: Chapter 4
Sad, but really good. It's very plausible that this could have happened at that point of the show- Jim seeing a therapist- because, if you really pay attention to those episodes, Jim was more depressed, and sort of drawing away from Pam.
Date: August 30, 2006 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 4
This was great so far, I really love how depressed Jim is. I dont think this is really explored to much but I love the idea!
Are you going to continue this? If you do could you send me an email at kgiambruno@gmail.com when you do? I am not registered at this site so idk if they have email notification or not but I would really appreciate it.
10 [Report This]Date: August 28, 2006 10:33 am Title: Chapter 4
Loving it! I can't wait for more chapters :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 27, 2006 10:48 am Title: Chapter 4
you continue to do such an amazing job with this. it feels so real, which is what makes it so heartbreaking.
9 [Report This]Date: August 27, 2006 07:01 am Title: Chapter 4
I could really see Jim trying to resist this whole endeavour, because it brings everything he has tried not to deal with for so long. I do hope he will finally start to see the light a little bit in the end though. :)
9 [Report This]Date: August 27, 2006 05:46 am Title: Chapter 4
You are really delving into the trace of sadness around the Jim character and making it live. Amazing, and heartbreaking.
10 [Report This]Date: August 26, 2006 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great, as always. I love the desolate feel of your story
"...my car’s doing this thing where it backs itself into other parked cars."
Intriguing.
Author's Response:
That was actually taken from my own personal life. Only it wasn't so much my car backing itself into other cars as it was my brother backing my car into other cars.
Thanks for reading. :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 26, 2006 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
Sweetheart, I sure do hope you're working towards some kind of resolution, because Jim is fucking breaking my heart.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, things will work out in the end, I think. But for now, it's not going to be so easy for Jim. Because I think one of the things that intrigues me the most about Jim as a character is that outwardly and with what we see of him, he should be a happy, well adjusted person. But, at least to me, he also seems to have this desperation about him. Like he's dying inside a little, because of Pam, because of his job, because of how life is turning out for him.
10 [Report This]Date: August 26, 2006 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh, Jim. You succeed in ripping my heart out with every chapter. This is brilliant and so, so sad.