Date: July 26, 2007 03:56 am Title: Chapter 5: Half of What We Say Is Meaningless
Wow, that tattoo was a surprise! Wonder what she was thinking when she got that... Also, I'm really starting to wonder what Roy's hoping to get out of this. They can't build a life together again with him using a false identity and back story, so is he just looking to get laid? Or is he just hoping to build up her attachment and trust so that when he tells her who he really is, she'll love him enough not to care? Or has he just not thought it through at all and is just going for the quickest, easiest way into her life? Hmmm...
Date: July 25, 2007 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 5: Half of What We Say Is Meaningless
I was getting seriously depressed thinking about these two wiping each other out of their memories. I like the RMBR JM HLPRT twist! Keep it coming!
Author's Response: Thanks, VB! Don't worry, things will brighten up for our young lovers soon!
Date: July 25, 2007 11:23 am Title: Chapter 5: Half of What We Say Is Meaningless
Ohhh, that's right, Pam. Remember! This is good stuff. I love that she is slowly remembering her old life - like being drawn to the button down shirt!
Author's Response: Yup, Pam's going to start remembering a little at a time... hopefully she will remember who the real Jim is soon? :) Thanks for reading!
Date: July 25, 2007 10:18 am Title: Chapter 5: Half of What We Say Is Meaningless
OMG, OMG, OMG!!! Ok, crazy Kelly squee over. I think.
The freaking dress. Of course it punches through her memory, like a oil spot that you scrub and scrub at, but it keeps showing up as the fabric dries. I like how you are handling the Karen complication, too. And the tattoo is that a bit inspired by Memento? (All the great mind-f*** movies, yay!)
Author's Response: Hey, thank youso much for your comments. I didn't think of Memento, but I do love that movie. I couldn't decide at first whether I wanted Jim or Pam to have the tattoo, but I thought it would be more surprising on our fancy new ms. beesley. the story will eventually explain the tattoo, i promise. and i thought it would make sense that the memories come back to her through clothing at first. :) I hope you continue to enjoy the series!