Date: July 31, 2007 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 6: Here I Dreamt I Was an Architect
oh wow this is so great!
it show cases that fate will bring them together
Date: July 31, 2007 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 6: Here I Dreamt I Was an Architect
Ooh, the phone call! Now we're getting somewhere! I love how they just sort of clicked again, even not knowing each other, even just over the phone.
And architecture? Interesting! About time Jim found his true calling.
10 [Report This]Date: July 31, 2007 08:48 am Title: Chapter 6: Here I Dreamt I Was an Architect
i can't wait for the next chapter!
<3
10 [Report This]Date: July 30, 2007 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 6: Here I Dreamt I Was an Architect
I've been reading this site all summer, but I finally caved and registered just so I could tell you that your writing is FANTASTIC. Everything on this site is pretty good, but you... you could do novels. You SHOULD do novels. I find interest in the smallest details, the way you convey the characters' little quirks and subtly hint at their feelings and things they might be remembering. It's the "show, don't tell" they drill into your brain in poetry... you've mastered it, and it makes everything feel so very real and... I'm failing at describing it, but after reading a paragraph or so of the first chapter I actually said (aloud, to myself, like a dork) "wow." Also I love how there's a lot of Clementine in this new Pam but she's still so definitely Pam. Basically... you're awesome and you've got me hooked. And I love your name (does it come from the song I think it does?)
/end fangirl
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much, koneko! It's funny and great timing to hear compliments like that, because right now I'm trying to figure out what the heck I want to do with my life, and I WISH I could just write novels... ah, it's tough out there. :) But thank you SO much for your input, and I'm really glad you're enjoying the series. I hope you keep reading!
Author's Response: oops, also forgot to answer your question - yup, my name on here is from the Old 97s' song. Love that song. Actually, this spring I dragged my friend to a Rhett Miller (lead singer from the band) concert in NYC, JUST so I could hear that song :)
Date: July 30, 2007 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 6: Here I Dreamt I Was an Architect
OMG, OMG, OMG!! (I keep starting reviews that way. It's annoying, I know.) The crossing paths in the Starbucks was killing me! And who the hell eats egg whites? Yuck! And I love seeing Jim excited about something. That has definitely been missing. From the show, too. I might be able to forgive you for making Jim tell Karen he loves her. Especially if you update soon.
Author's Response: Don't worry. He just THINKS he loves her - he's trying to put things back in place, but from his drawings you KNOW he doesn't really love Karen. No worries. Things will start looking up in the next chapter. Thanks for your continued support of this series!