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Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2007 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Dumbing Down of Love

I caught up with this story yesterday for the first time, and I'm hooked. So I squealed with joy when I saw that there was another update. This story is so amazing. I've never seen "Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind", which is why I had hesitated for so long to read this. But now I'm so glad I have.
I love that little backstory you added in that Jim and Pam had had an affair and fell in love way before we know of them to have first met each other at Dunder Mifflin, and then had their memories erased.

I'm on the edge of my seat looking forward to more!

Reviewer: JinRain Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2007 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Dumbing Down of Love

You've really done a great job with this story. It gets better and better.

Reviewer: office_romance Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2007 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Dumbing Down of Love

This is sooo good!!!!!!! Why can't Jim and Pam see they're meant to be? What will happen next?

Reviewer: blueturfbronco Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2007 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Dumbing Down of Love

Interesting,  I like how you pulled all of this together.  Something tells me they might just end up together...


Author's Response: You might just be right about that. :)

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2007 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Dumbing Down of Love

Wonderful! I'm glad the truth is finally coming out. I find it *fascinating* that they'd known each other before and erased that too. In an earlier chapter, when Pam had a flashback to being with Jim, I'd wondered to myself, "when did that happen?" but now it's all so clear. Very cool! I was also beginning to wonder when Pam was going to get around to asking Jim his name! That might have cleared things up a bit earlier!

Author's Response: Thank you! I, too, love the idea that they'd somehow known each other before working together. And I know, Pam should've really asked him his name, but I felt like that would've gotten confusing from a writer's perspective. ("And then, Jim did this. And then, the other Jim said this.") But now they've got all the information - now they just have to figure out what to do with it. :)

Reviewer: bufffy6 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2007 12:25 pm Title: Chapter 8: The Dumbing Down of Love

oh man! double erase! this story is sooo good


Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2007 11:51 am Title: Chapter 8: The Dumbing Down of Love

Good job with the not-so-improbable pre D-M backstory.

I love the diner scene, where they still "know" each other so well and are in tune with each other.  And how hearing about Karen somehow bothers Pam.

One more chapter? Boohoo.  Happy ending, yes?



Author's Response:

Thanks! I couldn't wait to write this chapter; I really, really liked the idea of Pam and Jim getting along so well and being so connected at D/M because they had known each other before. 

Yes, probably just one more chapter; maybe two, tops. And hopefully you'll all like the ending :)

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