ooh Roy & Karen getting their memories erased, interesting! I heart your version of ESOTSM too so much questionforyou I love how different our stories have become yet they're based on the same premise.  So great.  My favorite line:

He props himself up on the palms of his hands and touches his forehead to hers. “Pam, I’m happy… believe me, I’m happy about this, but… you’re not going to go back, are you? Back to him? Because… I think that might kill me.”

Gah! So angsty and desperate and sad but soooo good.   I hope that this time things go much better for them.  *hopes*  Also be on the lookout for more of my version (hopefullysoon) hope you enjoyed it!  I know i like yours too :)  let me know if you ever need any help with the epilogue or anything.  Great job!!