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Reviewer: Elle Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2008 08:09 pm Title: The Parking Lot

This is an incredible story. The dialogue between Dwight and Jim is so spot-on it's like reading a script from the show. All your characterizations are like this.

I see you haven't updated for a bit...please tell me that you've not given up on this story. It is so funny and the Jim/Pam moments poignant.

I got caught up the story and laughed out loud so many times. The story is hilarious and your chapter titles are worth the price of admission.

Thanks for writing this story and sharing it with us.

Reviewer: WeBrokeHisBrain Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2008 04:25 am Title: The Parking Lot

what a sweet chapter! This whole story had fantastic dialogue.

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