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Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09, 2007 06:43 pm Title: Souvenirs

Awww...I was wondering if this was going to happen!  I love that he just blurted it out but didn't back down.  Lovely.

 And that clock is even more hideous than I imagined.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: July 27, 2007 03:33 pm Title: Souvenirs

I love the word cacophony... so fun to say.

"Hell, what didn't he love about her, if he was being honest with himself?"
What don't I love about Jim: Hes Fictional. What don't I love about John: Hes unavailable.
Hmm... add in overqualified, and he is Jack Bauer hehe

:O. I almost was going to say something when Las Vegas first came up... like haha getting married. But I didn't. And.... :O.

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2007 08:15 pm Title: Souvenirs

Few things brighten my day more than some good ol' Moxie fluff. Yay!



Author's Response: Well, your secret is safe with me, larry.  :-)  Thanks - seriously.

Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2007 06:14 pm Title: Souvenirs

This is great fun! 

I noticed the Marriage License Bureau is only the next block over,” Jim said. He was more than a little surprised at how easily that information had slipped out, but not nearly as much as Pam seemed to be.

I'm glad to see Jim didn't beat around the bush!



Author's Response: I'm not sure Jim actually intended to say that out loud, you know.  :-)  But luckily for him Pam already knew her answer...

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2007 02:31 pm Title: Souvenirs

WHAT?!?!?!?!?!?! i'm excited..don't know if it's good excited or bad excited.. but i'm excited!!! (it's probably good excited... i don't care what the circumstance, i just want my JAM happy!!)


Author's Response: LOL - glad to provide a dose of drama to your day, StarShine - stay tuned for the last chapter, appearing soon!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2007 01:50 pm Title: Souvenirs

Love the contrast between the natural and totally 'unnatural' worlds you can only find in Vegas. 

Are they going to Green Valley Ranch to see who is the head chef?  Do you think it will be Rock, Bonnie or Jen?



Author's Response:

LOL - I guess I know who got kicked off last night then!!  ;-)  (That's okay, I'll be watching it tonight.)

My son's rooting for Rock. 

Reviewer: batman29 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2007 12:40 pm Title: Souvenirs

simply original & excellent! You never disappoint!



Author's Response: LOL - thanks!  Can I get that as my epitaph? 

Reviewer: Raj Patel Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2007 11:55 am Title: Souvenirs

The Clock Of Tackiness is resting lovingly in my parents living room right now, and I couldn't be prouder. The got it on their honeymoon hundreds of years ago. Great story!



Author's Response:

haha!  Wonderful!  Truth is (shh!) I love those clocks.  There's one at my mom's house I completely intend on inheriting one day.  :-)

Thanks for reading!! 

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2007 11:13 am Title: Souvenirs

Oh my god, you just took this story above and beyond my wildest dreams! (Not quite sure why I didn't see it coming, since you did send them to Vegas.)
The ending of this chapter surprised me so much, and in such a good way.
'It's what I'd choose.' Such a great line. Nice work Moxie.

Author's Response:

It's always nice to be able have a good story twist, I think.  But the next chapter might be the biggest twist of all.

Thanks for reading, desert island

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2007 10:35 am Title: Souvenirs

Awwwww!  Love it! 

Author's Response: Thanks!!  One more chapter (or so) to go...

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2007 09:27 am Title: Souvenirs

Yay! I had hoped that this was where you were going with this story, and I'm glad I'm right. This is such a fun story. Your details of Vegas are great and remind me of the times I've gone there!

Author's Response: oh good - can you tell I'm a vegas fan, too??  :-)  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2007 09:24 am Title: Souvenirs

OMG, I knew it!  The minute I realized they were going to Vegas, I figured that the ultimate in spontaneity would be to get married there.  Whoa...

Author's Response:

Hehe - true.  But they aren't married yet...   :-)

Thanks for the review! 

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