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Reviewer: dmbd Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2010 01:52 am Title: I'm Heaven Sent; Don't You Dare Forget.

WHAT?!?!?!

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13, 2007 07:09 am Title: If You're Leaving, Just Let Me Know.

woah. i was NOT expecting that!


Author's Response: I wasn't, either, but I thought some of the options would take the story longer than I wanted to. Hope you enjoyed!

Reviewer: JamLover101 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2007 05:55 pm Title: I'm Heaven Sent; Don't You Dare Forget.

you most definetely did not

and your welcome your welcome your welcome

but i should be the ne thanking you

:] 



Author's Response:

Well, you're welcome! I'm glad I did NOT sound rude...I mean, what kind of person would that make me? Being mean to people who read my work...Sheesh.

Reviewer: JamLover101 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2007 05:45 pm Title: I'm Heaven Sent; Don't You Dare Forget.

oh its a great story.

just that would have been a shocker. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for clarifying! And I'm glad you enjoyed - I hope I didn't sound rude!! Not my intention, I promise. Thank you, thank you!

=]

Reviewer: JamLover101 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14, 2007 05:17 pm Title: I'm Heaven Sent; Don't You Dare Forget.

family? wow that would have been a shocker

Author's Response: Um, thanks? Not sure how to interpret this, but thanks for reviewing I guess

Reviewer: UrkelGrue Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 11, 2007 07:17 am Title: You're Tearing Up Your Photos 'Cause You Want To Forget... It's Over.

I may cry...

Author's Response:

That wasn't my intention, but if it's a good cry because you love the story so much, by all means, do so.

And I'll apologize in the end!!

Reviewer: evil hobbit Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 10:34 pm Title: Concentrating on Falling Apart.

you're killing me smalls.

 



Author's Response:

lol. i know. i'm sorry.

i'm planning to finish this up (hopefully) tuesday so your murder will be slightly less painful. :)

Reviewer: Abigail Signed [Report This]
Date: August 10, 2007 09:04 am Title: You're Tearing Up Your Photos 'Cause You Want To Forget... It's Over.

I feel like I'm being extorted for reviews! :P I like your writing style a lot, but I honestly can't see Pam or Jim behaving this way. But poetic license, right?  Please make it happy!  I can't take them fighting like this.  Oh my fragile JAM psyche!

Author's Response:

You are, of course! I needed good reviews to take on vacation with me ;). Don't worry, I'll update Tuesday!

I know it's a little OOC for them, but I really needed Jim to be stubborn, and I can imagine he is a lot. I also needed Pam to be strong, but delicate, and vulnerable. I'm sorry it if irks you, but I couldn't get to that any other way! :)

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09, 2007 11:21 pm Title: You're Tearing Up Your Photos 'Cause You Want To Forget... It's Over.

Wait! What's does "this" mean? Your good, in an evil way. Great chapter..again. I'll be looking for an update.

Author's Response:

I think it means what you think it means (what do you think it means?).

Yes, yes, evil. Okay. :). But you love it.

Thanks for reading & reviewing!!

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09, 2007 11:11 pm Title: It's Only You, Beautiful, Or I Don't Want Anyone At All.

wow, I never knew Pam had that in her. I feel sorry for Jim here. But when your hurt things just fly. Great job, I look for updates all the time.

Author's Response:

Yeah...Well, I agree with another reviewer, my story is slightly OOC, but I'm just hoping it's not completely impossible for the direction I wanted to take this in.

Thank you so much! I heart you.

Reviewer: JamLover101 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09, 2007 09:34 pm Title: You're Tearing Up Your Photos 'Cause You Want To Forget... It's Over.

thisis a very sad sad story

but it is so well written.

and i am commenting so you will make it happy with your good writing 



Author's Response:

hee! thank you! and thank you!

i needed some drama in my life...the fluff is nice, but i definately do enjoy some angst (obviously!).

=D you rock.

Reviewer: the_squirrel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08, 2007 08:47 pm Title: It's Only You, Beautiful, Or I Don't Want Anyone At All.

o wow...that was serisouly harsh. is jim gonna cry now...::tear::

Author's Response: Hmm...I don't know. Honestly, I haven't started the next chapter yet. I was gonna do that in a bit though, so we'll see!

Reviewer: luchy Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08, 2007 02:39 am Title: It's Only You, Beautiful, Or I Don't Want Anyone At All.

augh! isn't it funny when two people love each other and want the same thing yet the words don't come out right and they end up fighting because they are too stuborn to just say the truth?  COME ON JIM, STEP UP! :)

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing ;]

I'll take that into consideration. lol

Reviewer: blueturfbronco Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 10:21 pm Title: Concentrating on Falling Apart.

This is an awesome story, keep it up.

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: evil hobbit Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 09:26 pm Title: Concentrating on Falling Apart.

...you are one evil, evil little girl. you know that, right?

geez. angst + your writing= love 



Author's Response:

*evil laughter*

Ahem.

I'm really glad you like this story!! I was nervous about this chapter, because I don't normally have things beta'd, and I felt this was a little OOC for Pam, but we don't know SuperAngry!Pam (yet), so meh.

hee!

Reviewer: evil hobbit Signed [Report This]
Date: August 07, 2007 12:12 am Title: Concentrating on Falling Apart.

...how do you expect me to get any sleep tonight with a nail biting cliffhanger like that!

loving this story oh so much. hoping for more REAL soon. 



Author's Response:

They tell me not to read scary stories after dark/before bed. Does this count?

Thank you oh so much! I'm going to get this REALLY rolling hopefully tomorrow.

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 10:16 pm Title: If You're Leaving, Just Let Me Know.

Oh no! I really do love drama. Great ending with a bit of a cliffhanger. Keep uo the great writing.

Author's Response: Hee! Thank you!! I will!

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06, 2007 10:14 pm Title: You Don't Recover From A Night Like This.

Although I love fluff, these angsty chapters are really well done. Great job writing this. I do hope they end up happy.

Author's Response: I hope so, too! I have no control over the demons in my keyboard, though, so we'll see! ;) I'm glad you like this!

Reviewer: Zach Swafford Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2007 09:19 pm Title: Concentrating on Falling Apart.

There aren't a whole lot of stories like this out there.  Keep it up.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!

Reviewer: Team JAM Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2007 09:18 pm Title: You Don't Recover From A Night Like This.

I am loving this!  I just hope there is a happy, fluffy ending!!!  

Author's Response: That's the plan, as of right now...but we'll see. My evil twin might show her ugly self soon.

Reviewer: bloody awful poet Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2007 07:52 pm Title: You Don't Recover From A Night Like This.

Wow what a great story.  I love a good ansty story and this is totally one.  a sad jim is always a sweet iim

Author's Response: Thanks!! Sad!Jim isn't going anywhere yet, I promise!

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