Date: August 06, 2007 07:02 pm Title: Come Back To Bed
Count me in as a JAM and John Mayer fanatic!
Love what you've done here.
My song suggestions are "Back to You". That reminds me of The Merger and The Return.
Excellent story!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really pumped about it too! I'll definately be using Back To YOu. I've already got the lyrics in a word document and ready to go when I get the urge to write it! Good idea! Thanks for reading!
Date: August 06, 2007 07:00 pm Title: Come Back To Bed
Wow, these are really well done! If you choose to do a chapter about a break up or fight, you should do it to Comfortable! And it's great because the "I want you back" at the end could be when they get back together :-) Great job!
Author's Response: Ha. That's so weird that you mentioned Comfortable because I just put the lyrics down in a word document and was starting to write on it. Good timing....I was listening to the song at the same time too...creepy! Wow. SO, I'll definately be writing one over that song soon....thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: August 05, 2007 05:33 pm Title: Come Back To Bed
your review is in your mailbox. :)
Date: August 05, 2007 05:12 pm Title: Come Back To Bed
Ok, I am at a loss for words. All I have is this:
http://www.johnmayer.com/blog/john/200612#239
http://www.johnmayer.com/media/images/blog/blog12.14.2.jpg
Author's Response: Wow! i had no idea that John Mayer was a Dundie winner! WOWZA! That's hilarious! I totally forgot that Michael sang "Wonderland" in ABC! That's great! Thanks for pointing that out to me! Also, thanks for reading and reviewing....
Date: August 05, 2007 01:09 am Title: Come Back To Bed
This was really, really beautiful! I just wanted to awwww all the way through it. :) I like it was "See you in the morning" that made her cry and realize he was all she would ever need, because I could totally see that being something very emotionally moving.
So to answer your question, I would love to see more. :)
Author's Response: You will definately see more of this! I've already got four other songs picked out for future chapters. So, hopefully more will be on it's way soon. Thanks for reading and enjoying!!! Keep it up!
Date: August 04, 2007 08:35 pm Title: Come Back To Bed
aw BeckySue you know my weaknesses! John Mayer and Jim Halpert?! Bestill my heart! Ha!
other songs to write about: I don't trust myself with lovin you; your body is a wonderland (duh!) Gravity, etc. More to come soon! I got to steal my cousin's computer for a few minutes and read over SL. And so good! I'll read it over fully tomorrow night when I get back! Adios!
Great job! I can't wait to see more JM fic!
Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for coming over and reading and reviewing this! I wrote this last night in an attempt to work out some of my writers block. I have to admit that it isnt my best but it was something that needed to be posted (it finalizes it...you know). So, it was a good idea when I started but I'm hoping to make it a little bit better with the next few songs....I love him dearly...John and Jim...ahhh!!! Thanks for also taking a peek at SL. I really need to get more on that story as well. Have fun this weekend!
Date: August 04, 2007 08:22 pm Title: Come Back To Bed
Really just the metal picture of Jim in bed did it for me, but other than that it was lovely. I love John Mayer, and this song. The whole Continuum album always seemed to me like it was written for the last part of 2nd season and the whole of 3rd. (Dreaming with a Broken heart always seemed like it was written for Jim). Anyway, use any Mayer song and I'll be sure to read.
Alyssa
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and reading! I'm hoping to do more of these, and yes, I'll definately be using some Continuum lyrics...love that album! I did write a DWABH fic a LONG time ago but never posted it. I think I've deleted it by now, but if I find it, I'll either send it your way or post it! Thanks again.....
9 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2007 05:06 pm Title: Come Back To Bed
Favorite Mayer songs: "Comfortable," "Love Song For No One," "Why Georgia," "Good Love Is On The Way," "Love Soon".... okay, wait, there's just too many! LOL I love everything off of "Continuum," and honestly can't say I have a favorite. John Mayer's amazing!
Anyway, to get on to the point of this review, I have to say that I really enjoyed this. Using those lyrics was a great idea. I love the reason that Pam was crying. You did a wonderful job writing from Jim's perspective, especially at this part: "He fell in love every time her saw her or felt her near. It was like he forgot when she wasn’t around but once she would return, he couldn’t resist falling head over heels every time." That part was written so simply (in a very good way!), and it sounds so appropriate for him. Brilliant job!
I look forward to more of these. Very creative and a fantastic use of Mayer lyrics! :) Keep up the beautiful work!
Song suggestions for another chapter: "Home Life" has always reminded me a bit of Jim, so I think it would be a fascinating look into Jim's mind. "Not Myself" would be a very interesting glimpse into Pam's thoughts about starting the relationship with Jim. No matter what songs you choose, I have faith that it will turn out well! :) I'm excited to see more of these from you!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your wonderful comment and your ideas! I'm happy you enjoyed this so much...and also, that line "He fell in love...." was something I had a hard time putting into words...but it just happened that there it was....thanks for pointing that out!
Great ideas....I'll be sure to look into them and see what I can muster up! Thanks!
Date: August 04, 2007 02:41 pm Title: Come Back To Bed
didn't jenna fischer say that to james gunn while they were still dating?
Author's Response:
You know, you're good....you caught that huh? Ever since she said that, I couldnt resist thinking it would work perfectly for a JAM moment. Great catch! Thanks for reading!