10 [Report This]Date: September 28, 2007 03:24 pm Title: Take Your Daughter to Work Day
apparently i wrote this part of the review, but never posted it... so here is second review for this part, then i go back to reading later ones:
"jimhalpert: I don't know, just am, I guess"
Thats my reasoning for why I am good with kids. It blows my mind that some people aren't, cause its so natural to me. Kids are easy. Its anyone over the age of 12 I dislike.
Author's Response: Hey, I think you've stumbled onto something here. Kids tend to be little 'truth detectors', they can easily see past all the BS we adults tend to throw out there. It's possible Pam wasn't good with kids because she was at a point where she wasn't being very genuine to herself or to those around her. Maybe Fancy New Beesly i\will be better with kids ;-)
Date: September 27, 2007 05:13 pm Title: The Job
AMAZING ! :D i loved every word of this (:
10 [Report This]Date: September 27, 2007 03:59 pm Title: Drug Testing
I love this.... i mean, I lvoe it all but this chapter is the best chapter of all the chapters i have read (recently... since the last time i said it... whatever0. i love jim only using smilies. and ... its so awesome.
10 [Report This]Date: September 27, 2007 03:54 pm Title: Michael's Birthday
Michael's birthday was the first episode I ever watched. And this conversation made me realize a) jim may be more of a girl than me haha b) i have no idea about what goes on in a spa.
Date: September 27, 2007 03:52 pm Title: Take Your Daughter to Work Day
I can bet he did date Brenda also. And Yes, I am totally scared about Michael's mother.
Author's Response:
I can't quite determine if she gave Michael too little or waaaay too much attention, but yeah, I think a lot of our questions will be answers if and when we meet Michaels mom.
10 [Report This]Date: September 27, 2007 03:33 pm Title: Dwight's Speech
that notification while typing... i love and hate it. Becuase sitations like this arise.
And Pam calls Jim out on the date.
I think this could happen. It did seem very Pamish, it wasn't direct, Jim made her tell, and yeah. I like it (um, yeah, should be obvious by the insane amount of reviews I am leaving).
Date: September 27, 2007 03:18 pm Title: Valentine's Day
boyfriendless Emily uses this excuse also:
pambeesly: it's just a Hallmark holiday anyway
And my VDay evenings sound like Jim's... without the beer. Does that make it worse?
I love this part to VDay! He gave her something afterall. I love Jim.
Date: September 27, 2007 02:54 pm Title: Boys and Girls
It does make me feel better about G/B... that whole conversation makes me laugh! and shudder in horror in thinking about kissing dwight or michael.
Date: September 27, 2007 02:51 pm Title: The Carpet
"captive audience" Yes. That made me laugh.
Wow, I have new appreciation for The Carpet with this chapter. Loved it.
Date: September 27, 2007 02:50 pm Title: The Secret
okay, seriously, i get back from test, and you break my heart with that last line. wow... wow.
Date: September 27, 2007 01:42 pm Title: Booze Cruise
Wow. This was perfect for that episode. Although such a sad note for me to have to end on. (that whole test thing I mentioned... gotta go fail)
Date: September 27, 2007 01:39 pm Title: The Injury
haha. Pranking Pam is fun :). And strange that Angela was there and so willing to take Dwight home *wink wink* haha. so crazy!
Date: September 27, 2007 01:37 pm Title: Christmas Party
Larissa as his sister makes me smile :)
"pambeesly: I don't really want anything that's a relic of Michael's weird man crush anyway
jimhalpert: Michael's love for Ryan is pure and true, Pam
jimhalpert: there's nothing weird about it"
love it!
There was a card Pam! There was!
I love taht GMMR interview, and awesome you being in Japan. I believe I knew that. Yes, I can remember most teeny little details about The Office, but, things about real life people... not so much.
Date: September 27, 2007 01:32 pm Title: Email Surveillance
Damit, I just realized you have 400 reviews. Craziness. I can see why, cause I am loving this story, but thats awesome.
ES - my absolute favorite episode.
Because it is awesome.
I loved Jim and Michael singing!
I never saw Napleon Dynamite, but I can see that. *shudders in horror* the idea of Dwight in high school.
Date: September 27, 2007 01:30 pm Title: Performance Review
I love that you included Toby liking pranking. I read that in another story, and fell in love with that idea.
And that idea of Jim IMing her trying to make her say the wrong name - so awesome.
Date: September 27, 2007 01:28 pm Title: The Client
Wow, this is great. I love the fact that (as heartbreaking as it is), Pam considers Cuginos a 'date'. And that they made up. Yay.
Date: September 27, 2007 01:27 pm Title: The Fight
if i haven't said it enough - i really think these are catpuring both their voices and how they would be reacting to the various episodes very well.
Dwight Dwight Dwight. I am just sitting here shaking my head. Dwight.
Date: September 27, 2007 01:25 pm Title: Halloween
Can I take a test on this instead of chemistry? "Describe how an ion trap works. Answer: Well, see, Jim and Pam, they instant message each other a lot. And its totally awesome, because they have a great friendship, but see, Jim wants to be more than that. Oh and I totally want a Jim..." I won't even finish that part of it. Cause I am doubting I would get any credit.
Date: September 27, 2007 01:23 pm Title: The Fire
"pambeesly: it's not anyone sang a song or anything"
LOVE THIS. I love it so much my fingers were off in typing and I almost typed :PBR this.
I have no idea what Pam's favorite movie is, but I think that is a legitimate reason to pull a fire alarm. In fact, next time I am in the same room as my crush I will. Except, wait. He works as EMS and works with fire people so that probably wouldn't be the best idea.... sucky.
Date: September 27, 2007 01:20 pm Title: Office Olympics
yes, OO was a good episode, but then with the call back, its one of my favorite episodes. i am so loving these. and haha. see, we are having this event at my school. and i got to think of names for each of the days. and one of the days we are having games out on the street. and so i named it measles olympics after office olympics. since its all for measles, ya know. i wanted to name it office olympics, but i figured people would get very confused. or totally get the joke and be like "awesome, an office fan!" and then give us tons more money. or something like that.
Date: September 27, 2007 01:16 pm Title: Sexual Harassment
i don't even know what part of this chapter i like .... oops, i almost evended it there. i liked the most. that changes the meaning a lot.
Date: September 27, 2007 01:14 pm Title: The Dundies
so sweet. pam hungover,but she still thanks jim, and this makes me happy.
Date: September 27, 2007 01:13 pm Title: Hot Girl
Its random mention time - but I like how you have them talk in lower case sometimes, and well, in general, its very chat speak - not the annoying how r u, im gr8, annoying stuff, but I am generally pretty lazy about capitalizing words and using punctuation, and so this feels really natural.
"jimhalpert: I don't even want to imagine a situation where he would possibly need to know that"
and i agree with Jim here.
and i am not a curling fan, i am with pam. it has to be a joke (even though i have seen it with my own eyes).
Date: September 27, 2007 01:11 pm Title: Basketball
yeah, so you may be getting like 50 - odd emails in a short period of time saying you have new reviews. sorry about that.
yay for happy banter and poor pam not really having fun, but you could totally tell she was root for jim (and checking him out at the same time)
Date: September 27, 2007 01:09 pm Title: The Alliance
i think it is realistic. i like that jim is conserned about her and pam's all defensive. i could totally see this conversation happening.