Date: August 14, 2007 10:43 am Title: i never said that it was time, i was just hoping it
I really love this story. I know, not an enormously in depth review, but I just love it.
Date: August 14, 2007 10:33 am Title: if i was lonely all this time, well i didn't know it
So many good moments in this, but this one made ME wild:
For what it’s worth, I think that sassy little cardigan is gonna drive ‘em wild.
Whoa! Jim with the sexy banter! Woo hoo!
Date: August 14, 2007 10:03 am Title: i never said that it was time, i was just hoping it
Aww don't worry about the wait. Tasty Jam Smutcakes take a while to bake ;)
Date: August 12, 2007 12:29 am Title: if i was lonely all this time, well i didn't know it
u r such a tease! lets get to the good stuff...
10 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2007 07:52 pm Title: if i was lonely all this time, well i didn't know it
This is simply so, so, so good.
10 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2007 04:56 pm Title: if i was lonely all this time, well i didn't know it
I love this. I love every part of this. I just read the first seven chapters in a rush, like a crazy woman.
So many things to love, but in this last chapter, the "Would you still love me if I looked like this?" game is such a realistic touch. Silly and quirky, and so sad as a half-hearted attempt to find an escape route. Sigh. Whenever I read something this awesome, I get all envious.
Author's Response: (i think your fics are amazing...)
10 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2007 03:09 pm Title: if i was lonely all this time, well i didn't know it
Weeehooo!!! I LOVE it. It's my favorite chapter so far. Tere are very few stories that make me smile when I'm reading them, & I grinned so much my cheeks hurt. :)
Date: August 11, 2007 01:06 pm Title: if i was lonely all this time, well i didn't know it
oh jeebus, I think I am as excited as Pam is!!! Love their cute back-and-forth on the phone.
Date: August 11, 2007 10:43 am Title: if i was lonely all this time, well i didn't know it
jeez I love your style. I love you jim halpert and your pam. I can't wait for more.
Date: August 11, 2007 09:12 am Title: here's to you and your lover boy
dfajfkld;ajkdldfajskla;fjkdl;sa. translation: NEED MORE ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2007 06:53 am Title: here's to you and your lover boy
moremoremoremoremore...before I have a heart attack!!!!
10 [Report This]Date: August 11, 2007 05:06 am Title: i've got your wedding bells in my ear
oh god, you stabbed me in the heart with "You wouldn't have to be scared".
I am so glad I find myself with tons of free time and this story! And is it bad that I sort of like the lame, sad flashbacky jim stuff? Its really good!
10 [Report This]Date: August 10, 2007 10:43 pm Title: here's to you and your lover boy
forgot to rate it so here's the 2nd review, and i still love it.
Date: August 10, 2007 09:43 pm Title: i never said that it was mine, i was just holding it
Well done!! Oh God why cant it be sept. 27???
Date: August 10, 2007 08:14 pm Title: here's to you and your lover boy
This is AMAZING! I am awestruck. Please update soon.
Date: August 10, 2007 06:45 pm Title: i never said that it was mine, i was just holding it
Just had to check in and that I am digging this version of Jim. You know, "Jim Halpert, now with balls". Or something.
10 [Report This]Date: August 10, 2007 06:21 pm Title: i never said that it was mine, i was just holding it
Wow. MY heart was pounding reading that. I could just feel Jim's anticipation, excitement, nervousness! So, so good. I cannot wait for more! You're good at this!
9 [Report This]Date: August 10, 2007 09:05 am Title: i got a beauty queen to sit not very far from me
This is great! I can't wait for the next chapter!
10 [Report This]Date: August 10, 2007 08:22 am Title: i got a beauty queen to sit not very far from me
wow this is really great. I'm seriously enjoying the style and the content!! Well done!
10 [Report This]Date: August 10, 2007 05:31 am Title: i got a beauty queen to sit not very far from me
I really really love this. Also? I love how fast you update!
10 [Report This]Date: August 10, 2007 05:04 am Title: i got a beauty queen to sit not very far from me
Wow. You are so good!!!! "It’s ridiculous, but he was suddenly inappropriately worried that his pants were sewn in a Sri Lankan sweat shop by a near-blind ten year old: another girl he’d disappointed." How freakin' good is that?! I am in awe : ) Keep going...
10 [Report This]Date: August 10, 2007 05:00 am Title: and i die when you mention his name
Unbelievably good chapter.
Date: August 10, 2007 03:55 am Title: i got a beauty queen to sit not very far from me
I love this story. It's a treat getting inside of Jim's head!
I love this moment:
The silence expanded for miles as Jim fiddled with the seam of his dress pants. He started to imagine who sewed them, and if it was even a person. It’s ridiculous, but he was suddenly inappropriately worried that his pants were sewn in a Sri Lankan sweat shop by a near-blind ten year old: another girl he’d disappointed.
That is so Jim. Looking forward to more!
Date: August 10, 2007 03:54 am Title: i got a beauty queen to sit not very far from me
How did I miss this earlier? No matter - caught up on it now and criminy, it's good. Really one of the most inventive, freshest takes I've read on the Pam/Jim thing in a while. Like a parallel universe of what must have been happening in Jim's head all those years - so funny in places, but also really poignant and incisive about the frustration and sadness and anger that he had to feel. Love how when he fantasizes about killing Roy, you just slip in almost randomly that he imagines Pam getting in the shower again - so funny (all too often in these fics, Jim is somehow neutured.) Anyway, just really sharply written - I'll be checking for updates!
Date: August 10, 2007 02:20 am Title: i got a beauty queen to sit not very far from me
Will he be allowed to say that every time he touches her it makes him want to weep?
That has got to be one of the saddest lines I've ever read here. Well done!