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Reviewer: electrictyscape Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2006 04:43 pm Title: Office Olympics: Paperclips
Date: December 18, 2006 04:43 pm Title: Office Olympics: Paperclips
I've now read this story over a few times, and this is by far my favorite chapter.This is also my favorite story, so win-win (win!)
Reviewer: Paper Jam Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2006 11:51 am Title: Office Olympics: Paperclips
Date: November 23, 2006 11:51 am Title: Office Olympics: Paperclips
And he’s really honestly getting tired of the way subtext tastes on the tip of his tongue.
This line is so, so awesome.
Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 
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Date: October 19, 2006 03:03 pm Title: Office Olympics: Paperclips
10 [Report This]Date: October 19, 2006 03:03 pm Title: Office Olympics: Paperclips
"And he’s really honestly getting tired of the way subtext tastes on the tip of his tongue."
That's it. Game over. Best single line of JamFic I have read EVAH! My GOD does that capture Jim Halpert!
Reviewer: Geinnob Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19, 2006 01:14 am Title: Office Olympics: Paperclips
Date: August 19, 2006 01:14 am Title: Office Olympics: Paperclips
"He can hear her being beautiful right now..." Seriously? That floored me....beautiful.
"And he’s really honestly getting tired of the way subtext tastes on the tip of his tongue." Wonderful
I love your work; your bring artistry and maturity to their world, but still keep everything in character.