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Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: March 21, 2021 10:49 am Title: The Secret: Puns and Photographs

This description of what Pam is like when the two of them on their own (And Pam had been wiggling even still because she was, for some reason, extremely hyper that night. She was always sort of that way whenever Roy wasn’t around. Whenever it was just the two of them. And he can remember the vibration of her laughter through his entire body and how she’d slid around in her bowling shoes) has always really stuck with me.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2006 11:27 am Title: The Secret: Puns and Photographs

Lovely. You make it so easy to see them at the bowling alley. And Yay, Phyllis. And I love that he tells her the truth about letting her win, even if she doesn't believe it. And sweet exchange with the Hooters waitress. And, and, and...

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 06:59 pm Title: The Secret: Puns and Photographs

I'm so glad you moved this story over here. I could see the picture, or at least the Pam part of it.

Reviewer: yippee Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 09:03 am Title: The Secret: Puns and Photographs

You are so good at this game. This chapter was just lovely & poingnant...you can always feel all of the emotion running just below the surface in all of your stories.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 08:21 am Title: The Secret: Puns and Photographs

Each chapter I think is my favorite, but I now know that this one is! I just loved it, especially the last line. So very poignant. Awesome series.

Reviewer: pennylane83 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 07:05 am Title: The Secret: Puns and Photographs

Oh. OH. I really loved this one. Poor Jim. And I think we can definitely pretend that this happened. Because it's just heartbreaking and wonderful at the same time.

Reviewer: Lissa_Maylee Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 06:05 am Title: The Secret: Puns and Photographs

*heart breaks a little*  Poor, poor Jim.

Reviewer: xoxoxo Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 05:07 am Title: The Secret: Puns and Photographs

Poor Jim.  Opportunities just keep whizzing past him.  And oh - the last line kills.  Because it's so true.

It's lovely - but that's no surprise. :)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2006 03:55 am Title: The Secret: Puns and Photographs

“Don’t marry him. Please.”   The refrain of my entire summer. Oh, Jim. *sigh*

 

I love this series so much.


Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2006 10:26 pm Title: The Secret: Puns and Photographs

Lovely.  I loved this:

He’s going to say, “I broke up with Katy because when Roy set the date for your wedding, I really, truly realized that I never wanted to be with anyone but you.”

Perfect!

Reviewer: bonorocks Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 17, 2006 10:19 pm Title: The Secret: Puns and Photographs

I love this series!  I'm so glad you finally posted it over here.  I think this chapter flowed well with the rest of the vignettes you wrote.

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