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Reviewer: NeverEnoughJam Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 19, 2006 03:18 pm Title: Valentine's Day: Diapered Dwight

there’s something in the way he flicks his wrist that causes her to close her eyes and arch her body

I swear to God this is enough to make me throw in the keyboard and stop writing fanfic. Superb line. Fantastic.

Reviewer: yippee Signed [Report This]
Date: September 04, 2006 07:25 pm Title: Valentine's Day: Diapered Dwight

This chapter made my skin tingle--loved the subtle sexual tension running throughout the whole conversation and loved the Dwight card.

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 03, 2006 07:50 am Title: Valentine's Day: Diapered Dwight

Valentine's Day made me feel as though something (a little Jim and Pam interaction, perhaps?) was missing, so this completed the episode well.

Reviewer: nomadshan Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2006 07:59 pm Title: Valentine's Day: Diapered Dwight

"...she’s seen him deal cards before and there’s something in the way he flicks his wrist that causes her to close her eyes and arch her body against Roy’s chest."

Um, hot?

I can feel how quiet her kitchen is, and how his voice must reverberate in her ear, even if he's speaking quietly, and ooooohhhh.

Awesome.

And also, the mental image of the card is great!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 02, 2006 06:08 pm Title: Valentine's Day: Diapered Dwight

I'm surprised Pam put Jim's card on the frig where Roy can see it but I thought Jim's drawing was adorable!

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