Date: January 05, 2008 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
"...it's completely inappropriate, and incestuous."
Hee, spoken exactly like Michael, as though the incest was an afterthought. I love his description of Jan's behavior!
Author's Response:
Totally.
I wrote this back before I really had a clear picture of Michael and Jan's shall we say - dynamic? I think it's sort of the way I wrote it here - and sort of sick and twisted and S&M-y.
Now there's an idea for a fic. ;)
Date: October 15, 2007 10:52 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh Pam. She's such a softie. She is so deft at gently manipulating both Michael and Dwight. Really nice.
Plus...I LOVE Swiss Family Robinson! Both the movie and the book.
Oh and YAY for the return of the fic!
Author's Response:
Pam is a sweetie. I don't care what that Filipelli chick says. lol!
So glad you liked it.
10 [Report This]Date: October 01, 2007 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
Lots of fun. Several giggles, some chuckles, even some guffaws. Vintage Michael absurdity, with some great Pam thrown in. The Pam-Michael dynamic is always fun, and you capture it really well here. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Guffaws you say? Alrighty then. Thank you for your conrtribution to the humor in this chapter. More to come...hopefully soon, definitely eventually. :)
Date: September 30, 2007 04:23 am Title: Chapter 2
Are you really writing this, or did you somehow obtain a script for an upcoming show? Unbelievable. Each character is so perfectly himself. And Michael being related to either Coretta Scott King or Spuds Mackenzie is genius. In case it's not obvious - I really love this one....well worth the wait.
Author's Response:
Heee Colette! I've been having the best time time ever writing this. And I'll take the credit for Spuds Mackenzie - but Coretta Scott King came directly from brokenloon. Thanks so so much!
Date: September 29, 2007 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
Hugs...I don't know what to say about this other than - perfection. Quality of Office fic just doesn't get any better than this. The voices, the plot, the completely on target characterizations...this is spot on fantastic.
Author's Response: Well LoveFool - that's so very nice to hear. I'm so - so - so glad you're enjoying it.
Date: September 29, 2007 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
I just had to say I continue to love this story. Yes, I do. :)
Author's Response:
Well - I wrote it for you - so I'm glad to hear it. :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 29, 2007 08:37 am Title: Chapter 2
You had me at "trees." :)
This is flat-out BRILLIANT! I... i just can't say anything else right now... :)
Author's Response: Aww Mose! Thank you so much. The fact that I've rendered you speechless makes me smile. :)
Date: September 29, 2007 07:18 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh. My. God. Please always write stories involving Michael Gary Scott because they are the funniest things ever. I have laughed SO many times reading this, it's ridiculous. I mean, you really managed to capture the sense of Jim and Pam in this season -- and Michael's laundry list (no pun intended) about Jan. Hoping they're related so he can break up with her--? HAHAHAHA. And Dwight... just... all perfect.
Wait... there's still more? GAH POST SOON.
Author's Response: Thanks Ms GreenFish. Michael is a hoot and a half to write. When I first began this - the Jan being related thing was one of the things I knew I had to include. I tweaked a little post-premiere to include the bit w/Pam - but the Pam/Jim interactions were in place before I knew exactly what we were in for. So, so glad you liked it!!
Date: September 29, 2007 06:55 am Title: Chapter 2
Are you sure you don't write for the show? No? Because this sounds like a great premise for a S4 episode. The characterizations are PERFECT, as in, I'm reading this and I can hear all the vocal inflections and see the facial expressions in my mind.
So you rule, as always. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: EH - That is always my intention and I am beyond thrilled when I hear I've succeeded. Thanks so much for the review!!
Date: September 29, 2007 06:27 am Title: Chapter 2
Spot-on excellent. The writers are going to be annoyed, that you stole such a good plotline.
Author's Response: Well I'm not quite sure of that - but it is very sweet of you to say. Thank you so much!