Date: January 05, 2008 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
I would love to hear Michael say "brethren" on the show. So formal :)
Is this still a 5-chapter story?
Author's Response:
Shan when I saw you were reading this I almost had a panic attack. OK - that's being dramatic. It was more like "Oh shit. She's going to find out it isn't finished." LOL!
I'm working on the ending now. It's still coming sooooooooooo slooooooooooooowly...but I'll get there eventually so stay tuned!
10 [Report This]Date: November 05, 2007 09:30 am Title: Chapter 4
Your Michael makes my head spin. And yes, that is a very good thing. :-D
Author's Response:
Thanks Ms. Mox. As long as you don't start spewing green vomit in my direction a la the Exorcist I'll take that as a compliment. ;)
Date: October 31, 2007 09:05 am Title: Chapter 4
It's actually good that this happened to Jim, instead of someone like Stanley or Oscar for whom it would have been just pure annoyance. Jim can actually enjoy the absurdity. Also- in the shower, eh? This is so funny and cute and in-character. I love it!
Author's Response:
Oh it had to happen to Jim. Michael wouldn't care if anyone else was related to him...except...well - we're not quite done yet. ;)
Yes. In the shower. Why do you ask? lol!
So glad you're loving it Lis and thank you for taking time to tell me so.
Date: October 30, 2007 08:50 am Title: Chapter 4
Wow. Poor Jim is right. I can totally see Michael getting hung up on wether or not Jim shops at Macy's. And the beginning - only reading the first page that's up on Amazon? Brilliant. So very Michael Scott. I can't wait for the return of Special Agent Dwight K. Schrute!
Author's Response:
Aw thanks belsum. Writing Michael really is so much fun.
As is writing pranks on Dwight. More on that later. :)
Date: October 30, 2007 06:37 am Title: Chapter 4
This continues to be utterly delectable. Hilarious. Dialogue straight from the characters' mouths. Dwight's growing exasperation, Michael managing to turn his crazy search into a way to connect with Jim, Pam shopping for Jim...just great. And I'll say it again: writing a fic that actually reads like an episode is quite a feat - just as hard as writing believable smut...wink, wink, hold the TWSS ;-) Love this much.
Author's Response: Muchos gracias mi amiga. Occasionally when I attempt things such as this there are moments I can see clearly as if they are on screen. This chapter happened to have quite a few of those moments. I'm glad to know the same was true for you. Loving that you love it. :) Thanks again!!
Date: October 29, 2007 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
YOu are a genius. I'm not sure how you continue to knock each chapter completely out of the park but you've done it again. Dialogue - spot on. Plot - completely and totally plausible. I also love the little tidbits about Pam knowing more about Jim's clothes than he does at this point. Love the idea of her shopping for him. This reads like canon!
Author's Response:
Well - not sure about that - but thank you. I've been taking my time with this story. I knew from the moment I began how it would end and what would happen but I've been slowly building the dialogue etc. It's been really fun.
Pam shopping for/with Jim is one of my favorite parts of this chapter. I'm glad you liked it too.
Thanks so much for taking the time to tell me so.
10 [Report This]Date: October 29, 2007 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
haha this is great, i am loving it so far. the characters are so spot on - exxxxcceelllent [/simpsons] work!
Author's Response: So glad you are enjoying it - it's been really fun to write. Thanks so much for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: October 29, 2007 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 4
It amazes me that you can do both fluff and comedy with the same great skill. And your Michael here is just absurdly perfect. Great work that has provided me many laughs
Author's Response: Why thank you. :) Michael really is fun to write. I just think of the most ridiculous thing I can and dial it up a few notches. Happy I could make you laugh. I certainly laughed writing it.