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Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: January 24, 2008 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 5

Hee! This was very fun. I love your Michael. :)


Author's Response: Semby I'm such a review reply slacker.   A (very belated) thank you for reading.  I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2008 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 5

I just don't even know where to begin.  Michael is related to Toby and has toilet paper coupons?!  BWAHAHAHAA!!!  You, my dear, are a genius.  You can write all the WIPs you want as long as the pay-off is that awesome.  (But I like one-offs, too.  I missed you!)

Author's Response: :)  It was a long time in coming - but I'm glad you enjoyed the end result.   Thank you so much for the review.  I'm so very glad you liked it.  And that's very sweet.  It's lovely to have been missed. :)

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2008 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 5

So cute! Love this!

Author's Response: So glad!!  Thank you!!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2008 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 5

Me again.

Oops...just realized this was the last chapter, which with the final bit about Scott Tissue, totally makes sense. Guess I was too flustered, what with all the Riggins talk ;-) My review still stands...nope, not taking a single word back. 



Author's Response:

Riggins has that effect on a girl.  Even a girl who is temporarily preoccupied with a devoutly Christian radio host. :)

Glad to hear you don't want to take anything back.  Thank you so very much for your insight and encouragement as I fought to get this out.  I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2008 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 5

Way to not only break through the block but smash through it.  When it's all said and done, this is both one of the funniest fics ever, and also one of the great Michael characterizations ever.  Brilliant from start to finish....now get to work on your next one. 

Author's Response:

As you know - this was not at all easy for me so for you to say I've succeeded in such a fashion means a tremendous amount.

Next one??  Eaaaaasy there buddy.  Let me collect myself a little bit. :)

 

PS: Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2008 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 5

At the risk of sounding like a broken record, this is my favorite Micheal fic ever. Seriously, you scare me a little with how well you write his dialogue. And the little bits of Dwight, and the Pam/Jim stuff too (like that you hit that note lightly here) - all spot on. It's one of the few fics I've read that actually reads like an episode.

You know I love this chapter - and there are way too many wonderful lines to cite (but Jan nipping at the raspberry vinaigrette - ha!) Can't wait for the next one (the dinner party?) Loving this almost as much as Riggins ;-)



Author's Response:

I am incapable of writing a story without Jim and Pam.  OK...maybe not incapable - but I don't like it very much.  :)   I had Jan downing a bottle of raspberry vinegar initially but then I decided she wasn't Meredith. 

Oh that Riggins.  Seriously.  It is not fair for him to tear at my heart like that. ;)

Reviewer: Big Tuna Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2008 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 5

I actually just watched The Last King of Scotland today (I'm a James McAvoy addict) for the first time, so when I saw this I thought I'd read it. And it's great! Very, very well-written.

Author's Response:

Well this story bears absolutely no resemblance to the one you watched - I simply stole the name. :)  !'m very glad you liked it.  Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2008 11:17 am Title: Chapter 5

Brava! Typical Michael hijinx, lovely Jim/Pam interactions, spot-on Dwight scene-stealing, and a conclusion that brought everything together in the way that resolves everything and leaves no one happy. It's perfect, vintage The Office, and you've done it marvelously.

Author's Response: Thank you Lis. I didn't even think about it the way you put it - but that's exactly right.  No one is happy - except Michael - who thinks that coupons printed out from the internet are an inheritance. :)   Thank you so much for the review.

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2008 10:37 am Title: Chapter 5

xoxoxo, I have a question for you: How did you get you get to be so awesome? Really?

This is one of the funniest, most well-crafted, most MICHAEL story I think I've ever read here! Wow.. .I'm just... there aren't even enough words to describe all the things I love about what this story chooses to be. (See what you've reduced me to? I'm laughing so hard my sentences don't even make any sense!)

Bravo! (although I feel like we all should be supplicating before you like Wayne and Garth before Alice Cooper... "We're not Worthy!! We're not worthy!!" )  



Author's Response:

Practice, Mose.  Practice. :)

Thank you so much.  I don't know what it is about Michael - but I'm getting really scared at how he seems to be haunting me.

I appreciate your cheering me on as I struggled to get to the finish, so thank you. :)

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