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Reviewer: MaryESP Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2021 04:10 pm Title: March 14, 2012: Imperfect Perfect Circles

Beautiful story. Very poetic d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;

Reviewer: pamelamorganhalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 09, 2010 10:28 pm Title: March 14, 2012: Imperfect Perfect Circles

those last two chapters were so great, i love how pam is sitting there at 4am in labor and so casual - good for her. i'm praying i'll be like that when my time comes. lol. anyway, fantastic story and i've loved reading this! btw, it's a decent hour that i've finished reading this at tonight. only ten thirty. not bad, huh?

Reviewer: pie_is_good Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2008 01:28 pm Title: March 14, 2012: Imperfect Perfect Circles

I don't have words for this.

I was all ready to say, a few chapters ago, that my favorite chapter was the one where Jim left Dunder-Mifflin because everything he did that day just felt so very him, just like the day he tried to console Dwight, just for a moment, in the stairwell.

But then you went and wrote the end of the story, and everything about it is just so real and painful and perfect in that way that isn't really perfect but just so right.

This might be one of the best pieces of fanfiction I've ever read.

Reviewer: Shassafrass Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 04, 2007 11:23 pm Title: March 14, 2012: Imperfect Perfect Circles

This made me cry. You're wonderful and this story felt so...true. Thank you.

Reviewer: naomi_dylan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2007 09:38 pm Title: March 14, 2012: Imperfect Perfect Circles

 

Great!!!!  The stairwell scene was effing HOT.  And I loved this line at their wedding:  "He had suggested that they stand around in awkward silence for a few minutes because that was more like them..." Love it!

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20, 2007 05:01 pm Title: March 14, 2012: Imperfect Perfect Circles

How is it that this wonderful story only has a few reviews? It really is fabulous. Really. I read it all in one day, and it was such a refreshing AU for these two characters. It felt so realistic and painful and sweet and happy and, just...I loved it. Especially the bit about the miscarriage. Because even soulmates have some pretty brutal bumps in the road to deal with.

Very nicely done. Off to see if you've written anything else here. 

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18, 2007 01:16 am Title: March 14, 2012: Imperfect Perfect Circles

I just thought you needed to know that I have just spent about 6 hours reading this whole thing and I will probably miss my first lecture tomorrow but it's totally ok because i loved this story so much.  its really nice to read a story where casino night didnt happen and things didnt turn out like a fairy tale...i love you for writing this

please do not think i am odd 

Reviewer: Lisahoo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 17, 2006 11:33 am Title: March 14, 2012: Imperfect Perfect Circles

The last lines of this had me in tears, really.  Wow.  Great work.

Author's Response:

Aww thank you. The end was actually one of the first things I wrote. They spurred this whole thing.

And again, your kind words really mean a lot to me.

Reviewer: kathrynann Anonymous 10 [Report This]
Date: September 27, 2006 08:22 pm Title: March 14, 2012: Imperfect Perfect Circles

Wow. That was truly amazing.  I don't really have anything coherent to say, but you did an excellent, excellent job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

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