Date: March 15, 2016 10:57 pm Title: She'd Give Anything
This was weird, and a waste of time. Both of them were unbelievable, so far out of character as to be painful. I just kept waiting for it to get better, and it just ... ended. :
Date: November 27, 2007 08:29 pm Title: She'd Give Anything
Hm... I have to agree with Jim here -- what's the point? If she doesn't love him or want him, why is she doing this? I agree that there is a place for Pam to be angry in S3, but this feels kind of out of character; she just seems to be manipulating him. I'm curious to see where this will go.
Author's Response: I agree that this is out of character, but it has a point. I had this chapter written a while back, but lost the best version when my computer crashed. I'll be working on it and will let everyone know when I'm fully happy with it...Or, I may just take it down. I don't know, I'm not happy with it. I know it's OOC, that's one of the major things I'm working on. Thanks for the review and for reading!
Date: November 26, 2007 09:14 pm Title: She'd Give Anything
OooOoo cliffhanger!
Keep up the good writing!
Author's Response:
I JUST posted this! Thank you SO much! I'm glad you like it!
The next chapter's halfway done! Be prepared!
9 [Report This]Date: November 23, 2007 09:20 am Title: She'd Give Anything
I just read all of these chapters and i just have to say WOW!!!
I like this angry, tough, kick ass Pam.
That letter in the last chapter was just beautiful. I hope that this ends well for them, if not together at least as friends.
More please!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you SO much! I'm glad you're liking reading this as much as I enjoy writing it!
You know, I had the ending all planned and ready after the first computer crash, and when it crashed again I lost it. So I'm not sure how it'll end, but I'm generally a fluffer. We'll see!
Date: September 11, 2007 12:23 pm Title: She'd Give Anything
ZOWIE!! It's really good and so angsty!! Can't wait for more. THanks for giving us 4 chapters at a time. So generous! It's really hard to see them not even talk or be friends and actually kind of hurt each other. I have high hopes for resolution. WAY TO GO!
Author's Response:
I loves teh angst.
Thanks for reviewing and I'm SO SO glad you like it! I'm writing all sorts of things right now so this might be a little slow but I very rarely just post one chapter at a time!