Date: March 29, 2008 06:32 pm Title: With Every Word You're Growing Distant
I've enjoyed reading your story and it has kept me intrigued and wanting more, chapter after chapter, although I have to admit that Pam's thought process has been a little bewildering to me at times. That doesn't mean it's not good, though. Reading your comments as the chapters end, I think sometimes you're too hard on yourself. I admire your writing courage and you've brought the story around to a place where Jim and Pam can finally communicate on a sane level. You're right about Jim needing to grow a pair so he and Pam could go to the next level in their relationship. Looking forward to your continued updates. Keep going!
Author's Response:
Oh, man, I am so sorry I'm like a month late on this. I really appreciate your comment, though, I've just had a lot on my hands.
I really wanted Pam to be crazy-confused because I think it's part of what keeps her character believable, at least for this story.
Thank you for the comments, and again, I'm sorry I'm so late responding.
Date: March 09, 2008 04:39 pm Title: With Every Word You're Growing Distant
forget editing, keep going ! lol I think this is really great, but I don't know if that means anything, coming from me :P
Author's Response:
Are you kidding? You're like my most constant reviewer! I value everyone's opinions!
I'm glad you liked it enough to review. Somehow the conversation doesn't seem 100% natural, but Jim freakin' grew a pair, huh? :D
Date: March 09, 2008 12:51 am Title: With Every Word You're Growing Distant
I really liked it.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: March 08, 2008 10:22 pm Title: With Every Word You're Growing Distant
I really am enjoying the premise of this series. Do you happen to have a Beta? If not, i'd like to volunteer.
Author's Response: I use one off and on, but with this story I have a plan of where I wanted it to go so I have not been using one (not to mention how busy my regular beta is). If you're interested for further chapters on this story (I really only anticipate two or three more) or on other stories I post, please feel free to e-mail me! geeknthpnk @ hotmail.com