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Reviewer: just-once Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2009 01:58 pm Title: 7:00 PM

Yippeee!!!!!!!! I'd almost given up on a update, but hadn't deleted this story off my favorites. And what do I find when I get home from work? Oh, I most definitely enjoyed! What a beautifully written chapter.

 

 



Author's Response: Yay! Glad it was a nice after-work treat :) Thank you so much for reading and sticking with this story!

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: January 21, 2009 01:41 pm Title: 7:00 PM

And just like that, we who are reading this let out a similar breath that we've been holding in for a long time. :D

I've already told you this before, but it's worth repeating here in an official capacity. This is one of your strongest chapters, full of rich language, imagery, and insight. Now, please don't keep us waiting for the last hour, kthnxbai. :D



Author's Response: Many thanks again, friend!  And thank you for looking it over! I didn't mention that in my notes, did I?  Darn it!  Well, again, thank you :) Your support, as always, means so much!

Reviewer: foreverdreaming Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2008 03:13 pm Title: 6:00 PM

Darn it.... ! Why do I never check if something is finished before I start reading?!

I'm loving this, and sincerely hope there's more to come soonish!

Reviewer: Madison Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13, 2008 02:23 pm Title: 6:00 PM

Ah, I'm so glad that you updated this. I kept checking, and nothing, but now, something.

Reviewer: just-once Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12, 2008 07:56 pm Title: 6:00 PM

This has been a favorite of mine for a very long time. I'm so glad you updated. I hope to read the whole story again in its entirety when you finish, which I hope won't be long. Thanks for the update. It was definitely NOT disappointing. Hope to see another update very soon. I'm patient, though.

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2008 11:20 pm Title: 6:00 PM

Wow! Another chapter! I am very excited for the final 3 - you're so close I know you can do it!! Go Wendy Blue go!

Reviewer: cheezy316 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2008 12:02 pm Title: 6:00 PM

Just read the whole thing! Wow what a journey! Can't wait for the last three hours!

Reviewer: dasani Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2008 07:22 am Title: Prologue

Wheeee!!! It might be finished afterall!! I was so excited :) I loved this chapter, thank you thank you!

Reviewer: jazzfan Signed [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2008 07:19 am Title: Prologue

I just read this whole thing. Wow.

And now I want to slap Pam silly.

Reviewer: PBeesly Sweater Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 11, 2008 06:58 am Title: 6:00 PM

Oh my goodness, I nearly peed my pants with excitement to see you had updated! And it was not at all disappointing...it makes me just itching for more as usual! You've still got it my friend. :-)
More please! :-)

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10, 2008 07:35 pm Title: 6:00 PM

Welcome back, WB!  Glad you had a writing epiphery and were able to continue with this story.  Don't apologize for the delay.  Sometimes real life gets in the way, and sometimes the right words or ideas don't come easily.  I'd much rather wait patiently for one good chapter, instead of some thrown together story that lacks characterization, and is full of painful typos.  So take your time and we'll be waiting.

Reviewer: SarahPlainandTall Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10, 2008 06:35 pm Title: 6:00 PM

Please, please, please finish this story. I just read the whole thing in one night, and I have to know what happens. You only have three chapters/hours left. Please try to overcome your writers' block long enough to finish this. Oh yeah, because this is a great story. I love it!

Reviewer: aimzers84 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 10, 2008 06:22 pm Title: 6:00 PM

Oh my gosh, I love this! I hope you complete it :) Not sure how much more is left but I realllllly like it!

Reviewer: Noodles Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: November 10, 2008 05:40 pm Title: Prologue

Great chapter. I like Jim being honest in this chapter. Can't wait for next one!

Reviewer: I_Still_Believe Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 10, 2008 05:34 pm Title: 6:00 PM

What a pleasant surprise! And a wonderful chapter. But please, oh please, tell me that after over a year of this angst we'll be getting a happy ending. That's all I ask :D
Hope to see an update soon(ish) ;)

Reviewer: Blanca Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10, 2008 03:42 pm Title: 6:00 PM

You came back! I know how thrilled I am to see a new part of this, and I just read all of the chapters from the beginning about a week ago. I'm so happy to see that you still have an amazing feel for dialogue and description. And oh, the exquisite angst. Great job.

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10, 2008 02:47 pm Title: 6:00 PM

I think I'll have to go back and read the previous chapters to fully appreciate this, but I liked it. I liked that Pam is finally admitting what's wrong and that Jim isn't apologizing for trying to live his own life.

Author's Response: Thank you! I felt it was right that Jim would stand up for himself and Pam wouldn't get in such a huff.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Vampiric Blood Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10, 2008 02:42 pm Title: 6:00 PM

Oh my gosh!  I was checking for an update on a couple of the stories I'm following and ... what a total surprise and treat!  I've been hoping you'd continue this story.  I'm so much hoping that you have Pam come to her senses within the next three hours!

Author's Response: Only time will tell! /Michael Thanks so much for taking the time to read the new chapter!  It's much appreciated :)

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 10, 2008 01:19 pm Title: 6:00 PM

I think I peed a little when I saw that you updated this story. It's wonderful and I hope you never get writers block again!!

Author's Response: Hehe, I appreciate the enthusiasm!  Turns out the cure for writer's block is a desire to procrastinate on other work ;)  More to come soon!

Reviewer: albie_ Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 10, 2008 12:54 pm Title: 6:00 PM

I'm so very thrilled to see an update from you here. I truly adore this story and I was wondering where Pam and Jim would next go. I enjoyed this chapter and I liked their final, quiet moment of understanding in the middle of Rite Aid. I keep staring at the clock as their time winds down and thinking what could make the clock stop. I guess we'll see if it does or doesn't. Looking forward to it!

Author's Response: Thank you :)  I thought Rite Aid was fitting for this moment of understanding. More to come soon!

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10, 2008 12:05 pm Title: 6:00 PM

Wendy Blue!  I'm always happy to see an update to this story.  I've loved it from the start. You're such a tease!  I want more updates.  I hope your block is gone...

Author's Response: Your loyalty has not gone unnoticed, NanReg!  I so appreciate you keeping up with this old thing.  The writer's block, for now, is gone and I have a good idea of how I want to wrap it up. Now it's just a matter of finding the time to do so :)

Reviewer: untherapy Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 10, 2008 11:59 am Title: 6:00 PM

*waves* I'm still here! Thanks for the update :) I honestly love this story, so keep going!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I'm definitely want to keep going and not take months to write another chapter :) Your support means a lot!

Reviewer: Sweetpea Signed [Report This]
Date: November 10, 2008 11:56 am Title: 6:00 PM

Wendy Blue, I'm so happy to see this back, I did a little Pam-type bounce in my chair.  I want to give Pam a good hard shake and give Jim a big hug!  I do think that Pam felt punished by Jim moving to Stamford and I'm so glad he told her it wasn't his job to hold her hand. 

Look, I know that writer's block sucks something awful.  If there's anything I can ever do - just have a chat or a few emails back and forth to get the blood going - please don't hesitate. 



Author's Response: Sweetpea, thank you so much for the kind words!  It's good to know that people haven't totally given up on this thing :)  I'm hoping that the writer's block is a thing of the past now that I've got momentum, but the offer is much appreciated and I will most definitely keep it in mind the next time I'm struggling (the same offer extends to you as well!) 

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 10, 2008 11:44 am Title: 6:00 PM

Is there anyplace more romantic than the toilet paper display at Rite-Aid? I think not. :D

It does the 'ol heart GALLONS of good to see this back again. And, speaking as one who is approaching the one year anniversary of his own unfinished story, I extend a fist bump of solidarity. :D



Author's Response: Mose, buddy, pal, I couldn't have done it without you.  Thanks for the support and the reassurance that I was on the right track.  As always, you rock :D

Reviewer: BerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08, 2008 10:07 pm Title: Prologue

What a creative story. I hope it continues soon.

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