8 [Report This]Date: March 03, 2008 05:48 am Title: Dummy its a Decoy
So cute, Snozdoodle : )
9 [Report This]Date: January 18, 2008 06:42 pm Title: Jellybean Poison and The Cheater's Guide
LOL!!! Best yet. I've been where Jim was, jelly beans can be deceptive. But the caste, omg it was great on the show and it is great here.
9 [Report This]Date: January 18, 2008 06:37 pm Title: Bathroom Check ups
Dwight running "in a less than heterosexual way" and shunning himself...gold. Pure gold.
Date: January 18, 2008 06:31 pm Title: Opposite Day
I sincerely hope Pam doesn't give up saying she hates Jim. It's cute. And I love the look they both get. Great job with Opposite Day. I was laughing and thoroughly confused.
10 [Report This]Date: January 18, 2008 08:43 am Title: Little Man Warmers
These are REALLY funny!
10 [Report This]Date: January 18, 2008 05:57 am Title: Little Man Warmers
LOL. Little Man Warmers?! How did you come up with that?! It's fabulous. I burst out laughing (thank goodness I'm alone in my kitchen) at Jim's reaction. What a wonderful way to start my day...thank you!!
Plus, the image of Dwight's reaction to getting a wedgie in his cartoon beet underwear will never cease to make me giggle.
Please keep writing these, you do them SO well, and they add some Office happiness to my Office-less life. :)
10 [Report This]Date: January 18, 2008 05:50 am Title: Chapter 7
Can I just say how much I LOVE these IM conversations! It's like having a little bit of The Office back that I can picture in my head. It's like having a little bit of JAM to carry around in my pocket all day...without the stickiness factor...
Sorry, this review is weird...it's early and I haven't had my coffee...
Nonetheless, Fantastic job!!
7 [Report This]Date: December 03, 2007 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 7
How funny that you gave chapter titles to chapters 1-6 and for chapter 7 you called it "Chapter 7." Which, now that I think of it is a title. Ok but its still cute.
And I loved this line:
"JHalpert: Oh my God! What a horrible girlfriend! Where’s the faith Pam? Where is it?!"
Author's Response: That was actually an accident lol... It had a name but I've forgotten what it was lol.
Date: November 26, 2007 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 7
How do you come up with this stuff? Its like you are in their brains!
Author's Response: Actually it feels like I'm just having a funny conversation with myself. It's pretty fun I recommend it!
Date: November 26, 2007 10:55 pm Title: Jellybean Poison and The Cheater's Guide
I just got into this stoyr and it is hilarioous!
Definitely how I would expect Jim and Pam to act. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Hey thanks! Spread the good news it needs a little support.
Date: November 26, 2007 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 7
... Can you edit the format so I can read it without getting a headache? I think it might just be an accident :).
Author's Response: Thank you so much for telling me I wouldn't have known otherwise!
8 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2007 09:11 pm Title: The Amazing Emoticon Man
I think you did a great job with the "romantic stuff". This was sweet and funny!
8 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2007 09:03 pm Title: Jellybean Poison and The Cheater's Guide
This whole chapter was a riot, but this part totally cracked me up:
"PBeesly: You have no idea how stupid that looked.
JHalpert: Aww I love you too Pam.
PBeesly: It looked so funny! It was like your face was too fast for your legs Jim!
JHalpert: That makes sense. It was like my tongue was pulling me."
8 [Report This]Date: November 20, 2007 08:47 pm Title: Opposite Day
"JHalpert: Oh God it’s getting longer."
(sorry, i have to do this) TWSS!!!
10 [Report This]Date: November 02, 2007 11:09 am Title: The Champion
LOL....very well done. I think they'd tie as comedian though. I mean, did you see the final scene of Branch Wars? *snort*
8 [Report This]Date: November 02, 2007 08:11 am Title: The Champion
Please write something about Pam's reaction to Jim at the Finer Things Club. I think that would be a funny follow up conversation for them.
Author's Response: Wow! That is a really good idea! Lol thanks I'm thinking of ideas now!
9 [Report This]Date: November 02, 2007 07:08 am Title: The Champion
I think this one was my favorite. It sounded completely real and plausible. Please keep writing them!
Author's Response: Yeah it's kind of my favorite too. I've got a few good stories coming up soon. Thanks soo much for the review!
Date: November 02, 2007 07:04 am Title: The Champion
I love all of these (x
ican't wait to read the one about the kiss in money. hey, sometimes cutsey and lame can be good (x
Date: October 31, 2007 11:56 pm Title: Jellybean Poison and The Cheater's Guide
I just caught up on this and it's ADORABLE--I wish the cameras would zoom in on convos like this on the show--great job!
Date: October 31, 2007 09:51 pm Title: Jellybean Poison and The Cheater's Guide
Okay - so now I feel bad I read these on ff and I did not review, but I love them. I think they are very funny - so please keep going.
Date: October 31, 2007 08:21 pm Title: Jellybean Poison and The Cheater's Guide
I knew I'd read this before!!!!!! Great job!
Date: October 31, 2007 07:24 pm Title: Jellybean Poison and The Cheater's Guide
These are fun!
You should definitely put the rest of the chapters up here. I particularly enjoyed trying to not giggle along with Jim & Pam in the the fifth chapter.
9 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2007 09:53 am Title: Bathroom Check ups
Okay, this series of IM conversations is awesome! I'm at work reading them (shame on me) and I keep snickering to myself and I'm getting plenty of interesting looks from fellow co-workers. That's always a mark of true hilarity! You do the characters so well, and you've got the IM conversation banter down. Keep going! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Lol thanks! I hope you didn't get in trouble. It's not actually that hard. I didn't believe people when they said it was easy but I gave it a go and it really is.
Date: October 31, 2007 08:04 am Title: Bathroom Check ups
ahhh that's funny (: i really love it when people are talented enough to make whole stories out of AIM conversations. THat must have been hard, but it turned out spectacular!
10 [Report This]Date: October 31, 2007 05:51 am Title: Opposite Day
I totally hate this story. Don't write any more. :o)
Author's Response: Haha officefreak. Nice to hear from you :)